Bathing with My Stepmom

Step-mom?

Nice story, but should probably be in Mature - no blood line - not incest

another chapter would round this story out nicely

Mature but still taboo

Remember, incest/taboo belong in this section. If this was a general hookup with someone NOT in the family, it would be in mature but since this IS family, it belongs here...btw, generally, dad's new wife is off limits. Can you say that this action is not a taboo in general?
This category has plenty of incest. Taboo has gone on the wayside over the years. This is a very short erotic story of a taboo sexual act. I found it nice. It wasn't as descript as many stories here but it is still effective.

Ugh

Why do you people insist on making them pull out/get sucked to finish.
This is a fantasy, not reality, ALWAYS finish inside her. no condom, no pullouts, no finishing in the ass. ALWAYS FINISH INSIDE THE PUSSY!!!

2

I don't want to discourage a young author, but the story doesn't have much development. Try to write a longgg story with more character development. Ask some friends for some plot twists. When it's long enough, boil it down to half, then take an editor's advice.

Not sure

I like the story, it is simple and to the point.
I do agree with the point about finishing, in this situation it may have started in the mouth but would have finished inside the pussy or by hand.
My uncertainty is the size of the bath and the position I interpreted would not work for me.
Overall well done