All Comments on 'My Busty Aunt Julia'

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daddymacdaddymacover 18 years ago
this was damn near the BEST fuckin' story

YOU HAVE TO make this a series!!

daddymacdaddymacover 15 years ago
i STILL think........

that thisis a GREAT SHORT story, BUT needs to turn into a series or u NEED to write MORE big tit STORIES!!!! there isnt much on here!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
great

want more now!

this is too short - and why does her name change at the end of the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

i also wana see her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
messup!

dude it says aunt julia al throughout the story but at the end it says aunt jane?!?!?!!??

you lied :[

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Setting

While it was okay that you skipped the specifics as to what Aunt Julia/Jane wanted for her renovations, part of what makes a story good is leading into how they got sexual, not just meeting then having sex immediately after.

3.5/5 (rounded to 4/5 for this voting system)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Proof read before posting

writer let slip the real name before proof reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Missing detail

Without the build up it is rather boring

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