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No happy ending here?!
Poor girl! I thought she'd just found her true love! Nicely done. I enjoyed reading it.
spelling
Yet another author who needs lessens in spelling or how to use spell check. The word is "nonexistent" NOT 'non-existent' though minor such errors damage stories.
Anonymous spelling
Hey Anonymous The First:
It's best not to tell someone that they need spelling lessons if you can't spell "lessons" yourself.
cheers,
Anonymous The Third
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