All Comments on 'Welcome to St. George'

HS, congrats for creating another superlatively imagineered story. Naming the capital of St. George, 'Chamberlain' is truly a wickedly amusing comedick twist.

Loved the story and characters. Great writing.

So envious of the author. Not only due to the attention he received but also being naked on an island. Such freedom!

The idea of a fantasy island like this is a brilliant invention and brings something new to the usual settings for erotic stories. Together with being well written, this could be the start of a new series (at least - I hope so). Please keep writing - I enjoy your stories.

Loved the story. Well written, good plot. Erotic without excess. Would have been fun to visit there when we were younger.

I loved the premise for the story, but the sex was always over too quickly and massively under described. Give us the details. I felt like you were always rushing through it.

I have seen that you are writing other short stories (which I have enjoyed) but this one really deserves further development. Please can we have more chapter to develop the story further?

Great story, it's just begging for chapter 2 with Kelly, Stacy and Joanne back on the island.

I do hope you'll write it - and soon !

This reads like a fantasy you have lived. My it be so !!

You wrote an excellent story !! I too, like several other commentators, can see a second chapter for this story. You have done it with other stories very successfully. Please, do it again.

Absolutely Brilliant. This story is well written and fleshes out a fantasy many who read this possess. The characters are great and their progression through the story keeps you hooked.

Great story. I want to go to the island just to relax and enjoy the nude freedom.

Flying from Miami to "within a degree or two of the equator" in just 2 hours isn't going to happen; Miami to Quito takes a little over 4.

I wish an island like St. George existed. I'd go there with my wife and stay a long time. Fantastic idea for a story.

How old is the narrator of this story? When I read a story like this, I like to form pictures of the characters in my mind. I don't recall you ever mentioning how old he (or his wife) were.

YOMEYO

Legend has it that the private Island of Necker operates in this manner. The fruit of much Virginity.

And well written

More chapters please

As one comment mentioned this story and the island of St. George is a common fantasy of 50s and 60s era children, that be me. Plus your story was well written and an enjoyable read, as usual.

My small thought pertained to the pilot Elaine. One sentence describes her filing fraudulent expense reports. Then in the next sentence being described as 'good people'...humm.

Still, thanks for the story.

Your island reminds me, in a small way, of Grand Cayman in the late 60s. I loved Cayman, and really enjoyed your story, hope to see more from you!

I read the word 'seaman,' where I hope you meant 'semen.' Sorry, but it in my nature to point out such glaring spelling mistakes.

YOMEYO

Loved it. 👍🏻👍🏻

loved this little fantasy sex romp, i dont like long stories but this one ccould go a few chapters more,, very erotic, open relationship with sara ,,,tried that with my wife but she was just looking to trade up,, dumped her quick!