All Comments on 'Losing My Balance Ch. 04'

Best friends, huh? We will see about that! They are smoking hot! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

~ L

Dang. The way Bee moves into Irri and kisses her....so hot. Looking forward to more.

They finally kiss!! This like all the other chapters was amazing. Thanks so much for sharing this story and the you enchant me story. You build up tension so beautifully. Keep up the great work! Awaiting the next chapter like a fien. Lol

holy shit your writing is so fking Sexy☺️!!! And I finally figured just why I love your work so much - it is because it always makes me horny as f@)k🙈. And while I love reading many stories on this site only a few get this sort of reaction from me....so yea thank you cause this is just what I want from reading erotica.

This chapter was perfect and I am Looking forward to reading more - next one should be even more fun with these two trying to act like they are "just" friends after THAT kiss.

This is an intriguing story, with two lovely protagonists, drama, humour, and a nice line in cliff-hangers. It does not end here, HnS, and that is an order! Just to encourage you, here are five stars to be going on with.

(If you'll allow me, here's a small tip about neater presentation: in all the places where you've used capital letters for emphasis, italics would look far better.)

The denial is hotter than that ravenous sexual kiss (as if that's possible). Anticipation is keeping me waiting for the next story. Well done HnS

Thank you for your writing :)

Please get the next chapter out ASAP ty...love it!

just wanted to come back and say Thank You HnS so much for also writing stories that represent the beautiful diversity of women in both this story and also in (You enchant me). It is absolutely refreshing!!!!!

Wow- so much praise for this chapter, thank you all! Like I said, I love hearing what people think (and it doesn't hurt that it's positive either lol!)

There's definitely more to come as I'm working on the next chapter, slowly but surely!

P.S. (Also grateful to the Anon about the small tip! I hesitate using italics because I think it takes a longer time to process when you submit for formatting... but it's because I get too excited when submitting a piece haha. I'll definitely take that into consideration though!)

P.P.S. Thanks for the praise for You Enchant Me as well! And for noticing the diversity :) Representation is important to me!

Hello, I just wanted you to know that I'm captured. I think you are up there with harmony haze as one of my favourite writers here. I thank you for your kindness in submitting for free your imagination and talent so that we can join the sharabang .

I think teasing is extremely yum and phew golly I can feel the sizzle from here.

Thanks again and I hope until we meet again you have sunny days.

_/|\_

You really have become one of my favorite authors! I really love this.. < 3

I truly enjoyed all of stories. Please write more you have a great way of describing how each women shows there emotions. Great at building up the story and love way they connect with each other. Suggest you make the next chapter very hot and please continue writing . Can't wait to read your next chapter. :)

I check everyday to see whether this has been updated!

No pressure XD

Waiting for the next!!!

You all are too much! Thanks again for the lovely comments (putting me on a list with Harmony Haze is too much, she's an amazing writer!) And I'm glad you all enjoy the teasing as much as I do! ;)

>.< Don't hate me for the people checking everyday, but it will probably be a few weeks at least. Still getting into the groove of this chapter, and then once it's finished it'll take a bit to edit and submit!

As a person who also checks in almost everyday (no shame lol), I really appreciate you taking the time to give us an update! It is considerate of you and I wanted thank you! (: You are an outstanding writer in my eyes, and this is easily one of my absolute favorite stories on this website. You either have me smiling, laughing, tossing my phone in angst or in disbelief, cause this story is just too good! Haha! Let's just say your stories, this one in particular give me so much joy and I can't wait for the next chapter! (:

Please update when you can! :)

You have me begging

This is such a painful series!! It's so frustratingly good and makes you ache for them to get together! The writing is beautiful and makes you feel their desire.

Please update this! It's so so good!

Will there be more chapters? i keep checking back and nothing, please let us know if you are continuing this story

Hi all,

Raaain: Thank you so much for those comments, it definitely made my day to read them and had me smiling! I'm still just an amateur writer >.< Just make sure you don't break your phone!

Anons: I'm sorry for making you beg!!

C_T: I'm glad you like it so far! I've been aiming for that ache so I really appreciate it!

And here's my update:

The story will definitely have more chapters! I've been struggling through writer's block, not to say I don't have a plan for what's in store for Irri and Bee... It's just taking me a lot longer than I've wanted it to. But the good news is it's finally starting to inch along!

Maybe I could post a hint of where it's going to take the edge off?

Thank you all for your patience and I'm so sorry it's taking longer than expected!

xxx

Yay!! tks for the update. Will be here whenever you are finished!!! Not sure if I want a hint though - I kinda prefer to delay the gratification for the full reward 😜. Howevvveerrrr if others want a hint - I will still read it lol. I sure miss reading about Bee and Irri though but I can wait ( I swear this site has helped developed my patience skills like nothing else) but I also learned here that some of the best things are often not rushed.💫

@vggirl08 Glad to see you'll still be here! I get what you mean about delayed gratification (I'm like that too lol). So I'll leave the hint off unless there's a big want for it! This site has definitely tested and improved my patience as well- as a reader and now a writer!

@HeartnSole I was wondering if you ever write on Wattpad?

If you do, feel free to add me LesbianGirlNZ :)

You inspired me to start writing again... that's why I'm asking.

I've stopped for a bit but will be working on something new soon :)

I was starting tot honk you forgot, glad your still working on it. Gooodluck and can't wait for the rest!

Anon: I actually don't have a Wattpad account but I'm glad that I could help inspire you! I'll try and look out for some of your stories there :D

Lesbrarian: You don't have to wait much longer!

This is an update for anybody who is still checking, but I finally finished Chapter 5! Sent it out for editing, so it should be coming in the next couple of weeks. (If you can't tell, I'm pretty excited!)

We are just as excited as you are! Thanks for frequently updating us on your progress. Cant wait to see how both irri and bee handle things now.

Quick question though. Do you have any plans to continue your you enchant me series? Just asking because I loved that series as well.

😘

Hiya eshortie,

Glad you're excited :D

Actually a few people have asked me that question, but as of right now I don't have plans to continue the story! I got a bit burned out on it, but that doesn't mean I won't return to it in the future.

No matter what anyone says, 2 bff's having sex does not make their friendship stronger, in my opinion it says they should not be bff's anymore and just turns out to be a one night fling which will hurt their friendship in the long run

love the stories... my only request is thag they be longer because they r so amazing

thanks