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Sapphic Serenity Ch. 04

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by Captain_Fapulus09/21/15

Pure undulated hardcore action from starry to finish!

Those are some wanton women you got there and still you managed to make it even hotter than before. Thanks for keeping it between them and keeping the affection for each other at record high. It was a simple chapter, nonetheless it captivated me throughout, as it deliver far more than just simple sex. Once more you portrayed the feelings, thank god they were mutual, they held and took them or a road of pleasure they didn't know before.

Please do continue the story as is and I hope to read more from you soon.

I was determined to give you 5* as is but that tentacle hentai reference made me laugh so hard it would be a crime to give you anything less!

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by Anonymous09/22/15

Best reading material in addition to being very well written. Would love to see a movie version of parts 1-4.

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by reader_363409/22/15

Very erotic

good graphic descriptions and good so far. However, without more of an underlying story line, I am not sure how long you can prolong a description of sex between two people. It was not unenjoyable but, for me, this story has reached a natural conclusion unless you bring more elements into it. Sorry, just my opinion.

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by JackM30ff02/14/16

losing interest

Again, I am in agreement with reader_3634. The story seems complete and this chapter seemed less about emotions and more about lust.

Only gave this chapter 3 stars and don't think I'll bother reading the rest.

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