by legerdemer
Even without the voodoo, I think Jack and Amy would have gotten together, but the voodoo made the plot even better.
Great story. Good luck in the Halloween contest.
Great story. I would have preferred a loose end with regards to Livvie's and Mel's fate with the panties being intact and Mel's curse unlifted.
Unusual story. I can imagine these panties providing uninhibited delights to the owners eager wet cunt. It would be a real test of willpower to get rid of them. Well written and interesting for non vodoo people. Please let us have more.
Great story and very unique. I wonder if Mel will continue to long for the panties even with such a short exposure. Characters are wonderful and HOT. I think 5 stars
What more can I say? Love the premise and adore the beautiful, flowing writing. Clear, well-crafted characters. Loved it. Brava!!!
~EJ~
Part II maybe? The self-healing voodoo panties! Made me hot!!!
Scrivi benissimo!
Your writing is superb. It was easy to suspend my beliefs and flow with the Voodoo element so that I experienced the swirl of hot arousal in the extremely sensuous and satisfying world you create in this story.
You deserve to have one this competition.
Every detail was amazing! Thank you for sharing your gift and making me as wet as Amy herself.
A realy great, well written story.
made me squirt on my office chair. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
An extraordinarily hot story. Well-written and deeply arousing. I came so hard. I have no complaints. Well done.
Thank you, folks, for reading my story. I come back now and then and I’m tickled pink (well, maybe black) at the comments I find.
~~Mer
Very erotic and a different slant on a familiar theme. Thank you
Well done! Great twist on a well used story and great ending, too. Really hot, and also well written and emotional.