All Comments on 'Pandora's Panties'

by legerdemer

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 8 years ago
Interesting voodoo

Even without the voodoo, I think Jack and Amy would have gotten together, but the voodoo made the plot even better.

Great story. Good luck in the Halloween contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW!

More! More! More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Kinda rushed ending, but still great, 4 stars

bookworm96bookworm96over 8 years ago
Amazing

Truly amazing and erotic !

💜💜💜

UrjUrjover 8 years ago

Great story. I would have preferred a loose end with regards to Livvie's and Mel's fate with the panties being intact and Mel's curse unlifted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fucking Panties

Unusual story. I can imagine these panties providing uninhibited delights to the owners eager wet cunt. It would be a real test of willpower to get rid of them. Well written and interesting for non vodoo people. Please let us have more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Well worth the read

Super story, love the masturbation scenes .

LBLR15LBLR15about 8 years ago
Loved the New Orleans setting

Great story and very unique. I wonder if Mel will continue to long for the panties even with such a short exposure. Characters are wonderful and HOT. I think 5 stars

ErisJadeErisJadealmost 8 years ago
Absolutely fantastic!!!

What more can I say? Love the premise and adore the beautiful, flowing writing. Clear, well-crafted characters. Loved it. Brava!!!

~EJ~

topoffagaintopoffagainover 7 years ago
Loved this!

Part II maybe? The self-healing voodoo panties! Made me hot!!!

lorencinolorencinoabout 7 years ago
Brava!

Scrivi benissimo!

Your writing is superb. It was easy to suspend my beliefs and flow with the Voodoo element so that I experienced the swirl of hot arousal in the extremely sensuous and satisfying world you create in this story.

You deserve to have one this competition.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow!

Every detail was amazing! Thank you for sharing your gift and making me as wet as Amy herself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
a.m.a.z.i.n.g!!!!!!

A realy great, well written story.

made me squirt on my office chair. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

Fereniki_AlexandrouFereniki_Alexandroualmost 6 years ago
Absolutely spectacular!

An extraordinarily hot story. Well-written and deeply arousing. I came so hard. I have no complaints. Well done.

legerdemerlegerdemerover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you, folks, for reading my story. I come back now and then and I’m tickled pink (well, maybe black) at the comments I find.

~~Mer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

Very erotic and a different slant on a familiar theme. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well done! Great twist on a well used story and great ending, too. Really hot, and also well written and emotional.

Anonymous
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