All Comments on 'A Quick One While He's Away'

by Deadly Joker

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
cool

short and sweet and straight to the point, loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
HOTT

HOTT keep writing these great stories

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Continue, please....

This needs a continuation with Paul fucking her and teaching her English. Perhaps after she gets a little adjusted to America, he can begin working on getting a lump to grow in her tummy.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great

What's great about this is.. that the girl is sexual from the beginning.. awesome.. If you want to know another one like this, that is EXCEllent.. run a search for good samaritan

I'm waiting for part 2.. this is awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Ya know, I was expecting a nice story for some reason, how the hell this wound up on my page still has me scratching my head. Didn't make it past the first few paragraphs when he starts to rape her. (Im assuming since he has his dick out and is forcing her down).

I can just hope she takes him in her mouth then uses her front teeth to fucking bite his bitch ass dick clean off at the base, and then hit him over the head with something hard enough to knock him out long enough for the fucker to bleed out and die with his pants around his ankles. Then either stuff his dick in his mouth or shove it up his ass.

Write something that isn't violent and doesn't suck ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
bad

rape is not acceptable; neither is disrespect and racist

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