All Comments on 'Caught In the Act'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Disappointing

You finished in a manner when the reader's were just loving it. Could go for the final act

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
could have been better

Oh for an editor and this story could have been really really great instead it was BORING!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Get the names right!

Michelle, Lita and Karen - two women or three? Make up your mind!

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