All Comments on 'First Swingers Party'

by haleyandjames

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 8 years ago
I know why James likes Haley!

"He grabbed both pair of boobs..." - She has four tits! Sorry, I couldn't resist! First of your stories I read. Interesting but could be better. Some grammatical glitches threw me off. Potential yet to be realized! Wish there had been some total swapping! Gave you 4 stars.

playman64playman64over 8 years ago
Erotic

Haley,

This is a very erotic story.

Really enjoyed reading it.

Steve

WestCountyDomWestCountyDomover 8 years ago
Realistic And Well Written

Most of the stories here have a few, sometimes more, grammatical errors. Your story had a couple. So what!

Actual swingers will recognize this as a tale that happens to many newbie couples. Many swinging women had never had a bisexual experience until they gave it a shot at a swinging party.

This couple was not ready for a full swap and including one would have been contradictory to how the story was introduced.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Oh Oh

What, you do not swallow??

Anonymous
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