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A Work of Art: Renee Arrives

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by Anonymous09/22/15

Did you bother to re-read this?

It really didn't make much sense but that's because it really wasn't a story. Not really an opening paragraph. Don't post any more chapters without letting someone else read them. This was awful.

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by Anonymous09/23/15

Grammar Police strike again!

Great story, ignore the critics. I would love to be in his place! Hope to see where this goes.

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