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Hot hot hot
Damn hot n sexy story make it at least 5chapter
Could be so much more
There was such a great start to this story and it was well written. It was too short. It could be so much more, to explore who is Cassidy.
Nertz to the Demands for a Novel
This was like a segment of a TV series. There were two crime cases. They were both wrapped up in this story. This is a short story, not a novel. The characters hooked me. Yes, I'd like to see them used again in other stories, even ones related to this one. SR does that, though. Everything doesn't have to be an exhaustive novel. I'd like to see this setting and these characters again (in fact, this setting occurs in other SR stories -- as well as characters much like these), but I don't want something like this to have to be a chapter of something bigger and rambling about.
Got my attention
Really enjoyed this. :)
Can I Be Next!
Up to your usual standards of greatness. Nice story, great detail and characters. I want to be Dean Dorsey. I want to be next!!!
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