All Comments on 'Saving My Sis Ch. 02'

I really loved Saving my Sis! Incest stories are a real turn on for me especially sis/bro or mom and son.

I really like this story keep doing a good job and hope to see another chapter of this one great work

WAS DAMN GOOD!

Great story. Brother and sis stories are the best. Continue with more chapters

Was very intriguing, but a litte to predictable. Could use some work in your techniech. But overall, for being your first story, it was very good.

Loved your story and would want to hear more on them.

Also loved your writting. Let,s hear more about bro/sis.

This is a great story that is true love between bro/sis which any one could read and undrestand their feeling towrds one a nether withch puts it over the top.

I was wondering if she's on birth control? Doesn't she get pregnant from all this? :-p

Might be something for your 3rd story.

Love these two stories, please keep them coming!

Please Continue the story there is a lot of potential in it.

This is a very good story. Please continue and keep up the good work

please write more this is exquisite

Great, apart from the anal. Dung-pushing is so out!

Lukas

Please, please, please, please write another. i love them. please (imagine puppy dog eyes) and i think that she should get pregnant aswell 'cos she's not on birth control or is she?

i loved this story you have got to keep writing.i have read a few of these stories and very few keep me interested this is one that does.please continue with it

Your story is by far one of the best brother sister relationships I have ever read. If you could continue this story I'd read it the second it was posted. ^^ A few pieces of advice go with the pregnancy, children, house, marriage (give one of them a legal name change ^^) and let the story end happily, such as their parents being shot in the head, thrown off a cliff, get bombed by the marines, taken to vietcong and shot in the legs and left to rot, or any other form of physical or mental torture you can think of ^^.

This is my little (cough) opinion

The crunch of knuckles against nose and teeth was soooo damn satisfying. Nice story. Very hot.

Keep writing! Its so fuckin hot!

i luv this story i think u should make her pregnant though that would be sex-c

You should keep this going. It is a very good story and has a long way to go.

BillyBoBob

dude keep writing i think its a good story line

Please keep this story going its too good to just stop, so damn hot i cant wait for the next part

This was a really good tale of sibling sex! I think you could develop this into a really strong love story. Reconsider adding more chapters.

Great story i am getting hot just thinking about the next one

i absoultely love brother and sister love stories like this. you are an amazing writer. please continue making more chapters and continue writing.

i think you should make her pregnat it would be great pleasssseeee!!! do it 4 us and Carol

i would love to keep reading but make her pregnet and them get married

It is, And I absolutly love how th story started, and is going currently. I hope you make some more soon. I have simialiar experinces with my sister, and this quite often reminds us of those memories. Please, Keep writing.

fab tell more

continue n the story, please. it was amazing

The story is damn good and if you can make the story into video will be much better. I presume all the people wanted to see it trough vidoe...

Tell us more!!

just a typical story for this site UNFINISHED as usual it could have been good if you had bothered to finish it no writer should have his stories posted if they ask the readers if they should finish it if you post the begining then you better be prepared to finish it other wise don't bother starting to begin with

very good story - looking forward to the next chapter and hope you do decide to continue - its very well written with a good plot - keep up the good work

keep it going , how about mum leaving dad to be with her children ? maybe a three way plot to get rid of dad ?

superb story (so far)

hopefully this will be added to, I like northlandkiwi suggestion about their Mum leaving their Dad and joining her two children.

again, superb story, well written and I look forward to future chapters ...

That was sooo hot. Plese write more. It was freaking amazing

why dont you make the brother as abusive as their parents after a while ? she could be made his sex slave or something

I would definitely would like to see more.

Although I’m guessing it has already been suggested (I have not read all of the comments) having the sister become Prego, would be my suggestion.

Al Borland

Nicely done, nicely written!

And to those in doubt, a Marine's punch can hit you like shards of broken glass. Don't ever stand in the way of one of those, and I say this from experience!

That was totally awesome, definately want a number 3

That was hot pppppppppllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssee WRITE MORE

Don't stop now..... I want to know what happens next.

Don't comment here anymore. This story was published 9 years ago and the writer hasn't given any reply to any comment till now. This story is indeed very nice but way too short for incest romance stories most of which are way bigger than this one

I loved it and want more in this series. PLEASE????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As you know that Mom and Dad would have not let her get on the pill and they are using no protection. Accidents happen. Thank you for writing.

Would like to see chapter 3 aleast if not more. Thanks

Loved this story and would love to see this story continue

When finishes school she gets pregnant and they get married keep up the good work

You need to adjust to each other before having babies. Good luck. Yes, I know that it is just a story. You might go back and burn your parents out.

after she finishes school make sure she is pregnant

This story has been a very fun read and I would love to see where these two are headed and what you have in store for them. You have done very well with the character development and I love the storyline. The tense on words like shot got a little sloppy but the story is so good it was still fun to read. Thank you for your work.

Right part 3.

have them marry and start a family

Loved your story. It brings back wonderful loving memories of my incestuous lovemaking with my Aunt. She was 10 yrs older than me. From my 12th birthday through high school we were together. I went into the service and we got together when I was on leave. I went to Nam and was wounded. My sweet love was devastated when she found out and went into town and got drunk. She tried to walk home (3miles along hwy. 101) and got hit by a car at night and died on the spot. I was in the hospital in Japan and didn't make the funeral. I still go to her grave and cry my eyes out telling her I love her. That happened 49 yrs ago. God I still love her and miss her sooooo much. So yes, thank you for such a nice loving story. Perhaps I understand this storyline better than most of your readers.

You need to continue with this story. I want to read more and find out what happens with them.

LOVED IT...FIVE STARS!

A great story line, I would love to read part 3 and MORE!

They should secretly wed and have children

Loved every word written!!

Please continue. She gets pregnant several times and they have long happy life together...

It doesn't look like we will get any more chapters to this story. But it was good while it lasted. Besides, sometimes it is better for the author to end the story when the story feels finished to him/her rather than attempt to continue writing without a clear vision.