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Saving My Sis Ch. 02

byPDumbledore©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/19/03

"Savign My Sis"

I really loved Saving my Sis! Incest stories are a real turn on for me especially sis/bro or mom and son.

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by Anonymous02/01/04

great story

I really like this story keep doing a good job and hope to see another chapter of this one great work

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by TroubleZ4u02/16/04

loss for words

WAS DAMN GOOD!

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by Anonymous03/01/04

I want more

Great story. Brother and sis stories are the best. Continue with more chapters

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by Anonymous03/20/04

Excellent, read further coments.

Was very intriguing, but a litte to predictable. Could use some work in your techniech. But overall, for being your first story, it was very good.

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by Anonymous04/02/04

Great

Loved your story and would want to hear more on them.
Also loved your writting. Let,s hear more about bro/sis.

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by Anonymous05/03/04

great story

This is a great story that is true love between bro/sis which any one could read and undrestand their feeling towrds one a nether withch puts it over the top.

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by Anonymous05/09/04

Nice work

I was wondering if she's on birth control? Doesn't she get pregnant from all this? :-p

Might be something for your 3rd story.

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by TheAlmightyZeus08/29/04

Great story!

Love these two stories, please keep them coming!

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by Xman7235710/16/04

Please Continue

Please Continue the story there is a lot of potential in it.

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by Anonymous12/29/04

WOW

This is a very good story. Please continue and keep up the good work

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by Anonymous03/02/05

Amazing

please write more this is exquisite

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by Anonymous03/11/05

SMS2

Great, apart from the anal. Dung-pushing is so out!
Lukas

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by Anonymous05/10/05

WOW!!!!!!

Please, please, please, please write another. i love them. please (imagine puppy dog eyes) and i think that she should get pregnant aswell 'cos she's not on birth control or is she?

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by Anonymous05/12/05

continue please

i loved this story you have got to keep writing.i have read a few of these stories and very few keep me interested this is one that does.please continue with it

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by pbd2player06/27/05

A small opinion of a fan.

Your story is by far one of the best brother sister relationships I have ever read. If you could continue this story I'd read it the second it was posted. ^^ A few pieces of advice go with the pregnancy, children, house, marriage (give one of them a legal name change ^^) and let the story end happily, such as their parents being shot in the head, thrown off a cliff, get bombed by the marines, taken to vietcong and shot in the legs and left to rot, or any other form of physical or mental torture you can think of ^^.
This is my little (cough) opinion

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by David4808/23/05

A marine never leaves a "buddy" behind

The crunch of knuckles against nose and teeth was soooo damn satisfying. Nice story. Very hot.

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by Anonymous09/01/05

Great

Keep writing! Its so fuckin hot!

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by Anonymous12/28/05

so effin hawt

i luv this story i think u should make her pregnant though that would be sex-c

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by Anonymous04/16/06

Don't stop now

You should keep this going. It is a very good story and has a long way to go.

BillyBoBob

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by Anonymous05/24/06

best ever

dude keep writing i think its a good story line

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by Anonymous01/17/07

Great story

Please keep this story going its too good to just stop, so damn hot i cant wait for the next part

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by oldwayne05/18/07

Great Tale

This was a really good tale of sibling sex! I think you could develop this into a really strong love story. Reconsider adding more chapters.

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by Anonymous01/25/08

Keep it Cumming

Great story i am getting hot just thinking about the next one

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by Anonymous02/24/08

make moreeee

i absoultely love brother and sister love stories like this. you are an amazing writer. please continue making more chapters and continue writing.

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by Anonymous03/28/08

keep writing its making me wet!!!

i think you should make her pregnat it would be great pleasssseeee!!! do it 4 us and Carol

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by Anonymous04/25/08

plese make more

i would love to keep reading but make her pregnet and them get married

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by Anonymous06/22/08

This is Great.

It is, And I absolutly love how th story started, and is going currently. I hope you make some more soon. I have simialiar experinces with my sister, and this quite often reminds us of those memories. Please, Keep writing.

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by Anonymous08/12/08

fab

fab tell more

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by Anonymous02/28/09

more

continue n the story, please. it was amazing

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by Anonymous07/16/09

ALEX

The story is damn good and if you can make the story into video will be much better. I presume all the people wanted to see it trough vidoe...

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by Anonymous08/29/09

Tell us more!!

Tell us more!!

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by Anonymous02/03/10

typical

just a typical story for this site UNFINISHED as usual it could have been good if you had bothered to finish it no writer should have his stories posted if they ask the readers if they should finish it if you post the begining then you better be prepared to finish it other wise don't bother starting to begin with

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by Anonymous02/23/10

very good

very good story - looking forward to the next chapter and hope you do decide to continue - its very well written with a good plot - keep up the good work

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by northlandkiwi04/11/10

sweet

keep it going , how about mum leaving dad to be with her children ? maybe a three way plot to get rid of dad ?

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by Anonymous12/18/10

continuation

superb story (so far)
hopefully this will be added to, I like northlandkiwi suggestion about their Mum leaving their Dad and joining her two children.

again, superb story, well written and I look forward to future chapters ...

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by Anonymous12/20/10

That was sooo hot. Plese write more. It was freaking amazing

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by Anonymous12/21/10

a twist

why dont you make the brother as abusive as their parents after a while ? she could be made his sex slave or something

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by AlBorland03/30/11

I would definitely would like to see more.

Although I’m guessing it has already been suggested (I have not read all of the comments) having the sister become Prego, would be my suggestion.

Al Borland

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by Anonymous06/23/11

Nicely done, nicely written!

And to those in doubt, a Marine's punch can hit you like shards of broken glass. Don't ever stand in the way of one of those, and I say this from experience!

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by Anonymous07/14/11

Awesome

That was totally awesome, definately want a number 3

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by Anonymous07/29/11

That was hot pppppppppllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssee WRITE MORE

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by Anonymous01/18/12

WQW

Don't stop now..... I want to know what happens next.

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by Anonymous02/12/12

The writer is dead

Don't comment here anymore. This story was published 9 years ago and the writer hasn't given any reply to any comment till now. This story is indeed very nice but way too short for incest romance stories most of which are way bigger than this one

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by Anonymous06/11/12

More Please

I loved it and want more in this series. PLEASE????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Bfreetorun01/17/14

Very good story. I would like to see some responsibility for birth control.

As you know that Mom and Dad would have not let her get on the pill and they are using no protection. Accidents happen. Thank you for writing.

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by sabra1602306/19/14

Next Chapter???????

Would like to see chapter 3 aleast if not more. Thanks

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by Anonymous10/09/14

Loved this story and would love to see this story continue

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by Anonymous01/10/15

sis gets pregnant

When finishes school she gets pregnant and they get married keep up the good work

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by Bfreetorun05/04/15

Get her ass on birth control so you won't have a child right away.

You need to adjust to each other before having babies. Good luck. Yes, I know that it is just a story. You might go back and burn your parents out.

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