You sir did it again! You delivered a story full of emotions, compassion, drama, mental challenges, real-life issues, tough decisions and love conquering all. Guess you could say that falling for your brother runs in the family :)
While this means that the Amy & Jack route is no longer possible I'm convinced you made the best possible decision given the situation of the characters involved.
I do have some questions though:
- what do you mean some thing that weren't mentioned in Jake & Jessica Ch. 07 - you only posted 6 chapters so far?
- will this be the only instalment in this spin-off?
- how will this make it back to the Jake and Jessica main storyline?
- Are there other planned spin-offs for other characters?
As always your work deserves more than 5* but I can't give it so 5 it is!
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Anonymous09/23/15
Jack and Anne
This story was amazing I loved the ending If becomes the Jake and Jessica I would gladly read it...
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Anonymous09/23/15
jack and ann....
Very good story, i like your writing..
keep it up, i'll read it all !
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Anonymous09/25/15
Proper grammar, please.
It's not"Me and Jack". It's "Jack and I" or "Jack and me". Really annoying. Also found it hard to follow the story with character names so similar. 3* for effort.
English
Outstanding!
You sir did it again! You delivered a story full of emotions, compassion, drama, mental challenges, real-life issues, tough decisions and love conquering all. Guess you could say that falling for your brother runs in the family :)
While this means that the Amy & Jack route is no longer possible I'm convinced you made the best possible decision given the situation of the characters involved.
I do have some questions though:
- what do you mean some thing that weren't mentioned in Jake & Jessica Ch. 07 - you only posted 6 chapters so far?
- will this be the only instalment in this spin-off?
- how will this make it back to the Jake and Jessica main storyline?
- Are there other planned spin-offs for other characters?
As always your work deserves more than 5* but I can't give it so 5 it is!
Jack and Anne
This story was amazing I loved the ending If becomes the Jake and Jessica I would gladly read it...
jack and ann....
Very good story, i like your writing..
keep it up, i'll read it all !
Proper grammar, please.
It's not"Me and Jack". It's "Jack and I" or "Jack and me". Really annoying. Also found it hard to follow the story with character names so similar. 3* for effort.
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