Alex & Alexa Ch. 07

Please continue

Please continue soon, can't wait to find out more about what is going to happen to them. To be honest, I can't think Karen would seriously object to their being together after almost losing Alexa.

I love this story

I love the way this story progresses and I wonder what would Karen think about Alex and Alexa's relationship and would mike think of it

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I knew this was a love story. All her kinkiness was just her way of protecting her heart. Both of them felt the connection but tried to hide it. I can't wait to see how this fake dating goes. Karen and Michael don't seem like people who will fall for this for long. My guess is Jeanie will somehow screw things up by ketching them together.

Don't Worry

You may be assured that I, for one, will cancel out the troll giving you 1's for ratings. This story has been a fun read since the first sentence and I, like others here, are happy and encouraging regarding your efforts.

Love the story

Alex and Alexa need to tell Karen and Mike just how they feel about each other and them being the parents they are, will except it without questioning things after everything has been explained without details of course. They are meant for each other so why should they part? Please don't fuck up this good story for your followers.
Then as the hint in chapter 1 and a little stronger in chapter 6 that Karen and Mike like to share their sex with others and It's only fitting that the sharing finally being with Alex and Alexa. This is chapter 7 and so far you have 7-5's from me so don't fuck it up. THANK YOU

All I can say is "outstanding!"

I love this story.

I have loved this story line keep it coming because it actually has meaning

Good Story

Like the story a lot. Good characters. Don't worry a whole lot over the idiot whose not your fan. There's probably plenty of us who make his (or hers) 1 meaningless in the long run. Keep at it!

Well worth the wait

I have quite a lot to say to this so I'll just list it below:

1. I'm jumping around of pure satisfaction that they finally admitted they really do love each other with all their hearts. That was the thing with them from the get-go and now finally seeing it fulfilled is the best thing this story has delivered! Her saying it to him in other languages and him not knowing it only adds the emotional connection to their existing relationship. I don't know how the rest feel but seeing a relationship bloom beyond just the sexual is sublime, no matter the context it's delivered in.

2. For the "keeping it under disguise" I have mixed feelings; I know they won't fall for their fake dates but why bother, it'll only make things worse for them and the pain will likely increase with each day. Not to mention the trouble for Alexa to explain her lesbian tendencies and for Alex ti find a fake date and then the whole fake relationship stealing time for themselves. This also bares the problem of getting caught in the act when they feel they are safe, and that bird-brain assistant might just do it as she does lack the most basic human decency of knocking.

3. Why not just come pout clean about their relationship to Karen & Mike, as kinky as they obviously are I see no problem for them to accept the A&A relationship and thus keeping it all in the happy family instead of fear of loosing Alexa. And if Alex decides and shows his parents his true nature he has around Alexa it would make his parents happy even. It certainly beats the getting cough with their pants down in the middle of the night in the bushes. Plus it might even be legal to marry in their case so no problem there form society pint of view, or simply keep it a family secret as no-one knows she's his aunt.

4. If I had not experienced it myself I would laugh my ass off to the hospital sex scene. As a kid I spent lots of time in the hospital for various shit I've done and once my roommate did it with her boyfriend in the adjoined room, so I know how frustrating the hospital time can be on a girl :)

5. I am relieved that the drama we all feared wasn't something major like real amnesia or Alexa dying, that would be really bad for out hearts. Also the portrayal of their struggle was really tangible and made me go through a range of emotions only to end in peace seeing them in love. There isn't anything that I wish more than their happy ending together, either with the family blessing or running away together back to the old continent where they can be their own sexually depraved selfs.

6. You taking your time to finish this because of real life has no negative impact on the is story or our acceptance of it. On the contrary, we appreciate the effort you invested considering the circumstances and are grateful for anything you post. The new fact that this story and the others you pursue, and the rest with that one exemption I'm waiting patiently for, are continuing was great news yet haste not, we'll still be here.

7. That poor sucker that is throwing his puberty tantrum has nothing on you, there are more than enough people around that like your stories and will grate them objectively that you have noting to fear for your scores. Let him have his childish fun as it's obviously all he has.

8. As for the story, or rather this chapter, as a whole I must give you praise for another outstanding ale that captivated me from the first sentence to the last. As I said before the emotions were not only real-felt but quite literally transferred, the action was sweet and believable, the drama was real and brought them closer faster than they might have planed, the decisions were tough but necessary, the PC/console references were spot-on and the overall atmosphere was a bit darkened, just like in the real life before the sun breached the clouds after a rainy day.

9. Gave you those well earned and deserved 5* and not just because I give them when you write something but because all the above!

10. Just to round thing up I need to ask (or beg, extort, bribe...) this of you - please for the love of fridge, yes I out food before god, give them a happy ending together!

Thanks for reading the wall of text,
best regards,
Capt. Fap

outstanding story, from the start

I totally agree with what Captain_Fapulus had to say. I also think Mike & karen would be happy with their relationship as Karen wouldn't like to loose her sister because alexa would feel she would have to move out, or she wouldn't want her son to move away so that alexa could stay with her. But if they ever did break the relationship it wouldn't work for them to be close together going forward.Plus another reason Karen would likely accept their love relationship because if she rejects it she could loose both of them when they decide to leave completely and start back in the country with her friend Freja.So Please do not break them up or mess with the fake dating.
Fred

So good yet so depressing

This better end in a happy ending, they are just too good with each other.

Great work

Read your comment about the troll; don't pay that stuff any attention. Keep the good work flowing over there. I'm seriously impressed with this storyline; and that's saying something because this is the first comment I've ever posted. Know that the fans is this storyline want it to continue just as Alex & Alexa want it to continue.

Well done

Well done - I hope you have many more chapters with acceptance and love of their relationship.

I just hope it won't get too messy. With Alexa having Jeanie and Alex getting a girlfriend, that's 4 people there that (I assume eventually) will all end up in bed together. It could work in some cases, I just hope you'll do it well.

One thing that could work that I can think of is maybe this: Jeanie said that it was "hot" that they were related right? Maybe she had the thought before that they looked good together and adding that to the fact that they're aunt/nephew, she thought the incest part of it was "hot". Maybe she, too, has a similar thing going on? Maybe a sister or a cousin that she's involved with, which she could then introduce to Alex? Even as empty as her head seems, she would probably be able to keep the Alex/Alexa secret then, considering her having to keep a similar secret for herself already.

I'll just repeat what someone before me said - I really hope you'll give them a happy ending together :)

Excellent

Just like the others, I agree with everyone this is an excellent story. I would think that Karen & Mike are more forward thinkers than they everyone thinks, maybe they already know , but are just waiting for Alex & Alexa to tell them. Maybe Mike & Karen would know how they could keep it in the family and not let anyone else know, like have them get married in Europe disguised as a hiatus. It could work.

Very Good

Personally I think Alex and Alexa need to have a sit down with Karen and Mike. Get an opinion or feedback.

Smart Young People

Love the story. Love the innocence of Alex and Alexa (I can't find the words.).
Isn't it sweet that the two of them believe that no one has caught on to them. OK, Jeannie probably watched them from across the creek, if she is as clueless as she is perceived, which is up in the air. Brilliant people tend to underestimate the intelligence of lesser minds.

Excellent in every sense that writing can be judged by!! Continue!!

Superb sharing of what must be some interesting stuff floating around in the head of BH, a lil' sampling of many areas wound together and worth the wait to enjoy!
BRAVO!!

still wonderful...

I truly love this story...i do believe they must talk to his mom in the last
Chapter of this story....but only after she finds herself pregnant. WOW

Boing!

I love stories where sex is part of the story and not just "the" story. I also loved the Red Green reference at the end of your comments!

Another Brilliant Chapter

5 * from me.
I could tell you how I wanted the story to go but, frankly, I would much rather let your imagination take charge. It has done pretty well up to now. All I can say is that I prefer happy, enjoyable sex so unhappy endings are not the best for me.

love it 5 stars and keep the chapters coming

Not the troll...

but, I don't understand why they have to start seeing others...maybe they'll see that & drop the fake dating.

This can only build to one ending: dad and mom/sister discovering A&A....

Good storytelling...Marvin

love it so far

This is by far one of my favorite stories.

Just dont ruin it like soooo many other do by adding in others.

I am so tired of getting into a great story arc, only to have the author add in a sister/mom/dad/brother/girlfriend/boyfriend.

This is a great love story/romance. keep it pure please.

Concerning Jeannie

Both Alex and Alexa are very intelligent individuals who need to be stimulated intellectually as well as sexually. They need both those components in a relationship to keep them happy. Jeannie can only provide the sexual component and I believe Alex and Alexa would become bored with her rather quickly. On a side note...haters of this story NEED NOT READ IT!!! I love this story and your writing style. If you ever need a proofreader, I would love to do that for you, except for checking the correct spelling and/or punctuation in a foreign language. 5 stars!

Addicted

Love this story, please please please make it long.

Do you know what you did???????

Dad's line about 'dirty console peasants'? I actually shot my ginger ale out my nose and pee'd myself all at once. Thanks, you bastard!

Hi, Biscuit Hammer, C here. Not signing in to review, even though this crowd seems friendlier. I'll start at the beginning and make my way down the list for my review. Hope you don't mind, because there's a lot to cover.

I was every bit as worried as Alex was and scared for Alexa when he was driving to the hospital. You're very good at making emotions real, I appreciate that. It keeps me hooked. I was relieved when he read the chart to find out she was fine. Then I freaked out when she pretended to have amnesia. Forget Alex, I nearly fell on the floor. Then it turned out she was pranking him and I was sooooooo mad at you AND her. That's right, you got me mad at a written character, like it had actually happened. You're a fucker, sir. Well done.

Then his line about trading her back made me laugh in delight, because I could sigh in relief. Then Karen kept making pseudo-snide remarks at her son, like the 'Grumio' thing. I had to Google that, but it made me snicker.

"Ephemeral and superficial, like a Sociology degree." I burst out laughing again and scared my cat. My cat hates you now.

I was touched that Karen was crying in the hallway but then I felt so bad for Alexa when she confessed to Alex that she was in love with him. It made my heart soar to hear her confess it, but the circumstances were very real, for them and for me. I believed it.

The conversation in the hallway where they referenced video games was amazing, because it gave the normally stuffy-appearing Karen some street cred about knowing modern or cool things. Mike, as always, had a hilarious response as always. His sense of humor reminds me of how you write, so I'm assuming he's sort of your avatar in this story. Karen calling Alex 'Link' made me snicker a lot. My roomate thinks I'm deranged, I'm pretty sure.

Then Alex and Alexa had their heartfelt but seemingly hopeless talk. Jeanie the Idiot showed up and added a dimension we haven't seen yet, just hints of Alexa's past sexual escapades. They discussed the fake-dating, even through they thought it wouldn't ultimately work but were out of ideas. When Alexa cried as Alex was leaving, I really felt for her, you know? Once again, I believed it.

Alex's respite at home was a welcome break from the hurt. We got to see Karen's human side, which I appreciated very much. I always liked her, but seeing her let her hair down is so rewarding. Then Alex goes back and Alexa is very much her normal self, bright-eyed and dazzling and Alex trolls her in revenge. It was magical to watch the interplay and how having sex was her answer. Watching them make love while knowng they were now in love was wonderful.

Now we know what Alexa's doing with all the pictures, anyway. It was a cool answer to the question. The Skype session was a perfect end to the chapter, because it was still sexually-charged but also much more relaxed and just pleasant. They went to sleep totally in love.

And like I've said before, ignore the trolls. If you've got some dick actually going to the trouble of going to different ISP's and computers to try and tank your stories, then he's pathetic. If it comes down to it, I'll go to different computers and give you 5's to make up for his douchebaggery. This story is a 5 easily, and only a 4 if a person is some sort of freaking erotic literature scholar with a stick up their butt. If I don't like a story, I don't review it and often won't rate it either. I'll leave constructive criticism, but I'm never nasty about it like some people. And it's weird about the formatting thing. Hope it works itself out so we can get chapters sooner.

That's all for now. This was the best chapter yet. And I hope you don't mind if I steal the 'dirty console peasant' thing, because I'm gonna be stuck on it for a long time.

And my cat hates you.

- Cori

Great Story

I love this story but why make them go with other people when you can just let them continue going and let them get caught but not split the family up or have one of them confess then write a after effect story to it..Only Part I don't like about the story so far is the"pee" part but that's my thoughts.Keep up the great work

time for resolution

Great story, but it's time for some sort of resolution, Have her come home and get caught, Resolve the home life, then spin off to acceptance by others.
Also, no others, not even his parents.
Maybe follow wuth next generation.
Tony

great story keep it going

In regard to GoldenT613's comment. Bring the girl in and show that her dumb and dumber is an act, to keep the world from knowing she is about 185 or above IQ' She just does not want to be seen as a nerd. And of course the "rents" have to figure out what is going on when they both start dating the same girl on a regular basis. Speaking of "rents" I suspect their kink will figure into the relationship at some time, sister love going overboard to start with of course.

DONT YOU DARE STOP WRITING

i love all of your stories and you have easily become my favorite author on this site love the work keep it up

I could see this

The parents already know what is going on. They watch them date other people and when it all comes to an head the parents then just say that they had a bet to see how long Alex and Alexa would continue trying to hide it.
The parents probably think it is funny.

Haven't read Khan yet.

But, I expect it will be of the high quality your readers have come to expect. This WAS your best chapter to date on this story. When readers tell you they felt the emotions you sought to convey, you should feel successful. I am one such reader. Everyday, as I scroll through the new submissions, I look for your "nom de plume" first.

Editor

You mentioned that you were lookin for a new editor, and I think I could fill the position. If you are interested contact me at 256-343-8055

more please

I'm sorry to hear that you are getting negative feedback. I have thruroughly enjoyed every story your's that I read so far. I expect the others to be just as good.

* * * * *

I've been reading stories here a very,
very long time...

Writing a story is like baking a cake.
Chose your ingredients well and take your time.
You have already done this and its turned out
perfectly so far.

Now comes the hard part, resisting the urge
to over decorate. to add on extras it doesn't
need can totally ruin how wonderful this
one already tastes.

* * * * * there ya go

I rarely give 5's but I just love this story, don't know why exactly but I do. Please keep your chin up and your stick on the ice !

whats the username of the cockmongler?

maybe he needs to banned or publicly humiliated...lol

This would be a hell of a twist

Something out of left field.... All the high stress events cumulatively build up to render her implant ineffective and she comes up pregnant with Alex's baby. Say the conception could be tied to their union in the hospital. Everyone knows that high emotional stress and distress can mess with the body physically and render medications ineffective or completely useless. It would be really interesting to explore how everyone would handle it. My guesstimate would be that it would push Alex to finally stand up to his mom, convince Alexa to go along with him and declare themselves and set the stage for a really wonderful life together. I a really hopeless romantic. I agree with others, leave anyone else out of it and let them commit to each other totally. It's their best chance to succeed.

Careful! Don't stick to the ice!!!

Keep on keepin' on. Please. It is so very disgusting that some people are so small that they denigrate freely given labors. I enjoy your work and am appreciative of all your effort. Bless you my friend. Lyn

Keep writing and sharing

BH,

My comment title says it all from my perspective. I am neither a professional critic nor a publishable author. I do enjoy several of your stories ongoing. Do I agree with their " direction " or what your characters say and do? Come on ....these are fiction and you author are sharing them freely. I enjoy the ride and can exit when
I don't. So far the ride is MORE than worth my time. I truly appreciate your efforts!

Ed

Goodluck with your restart

Thanx voor your stories, wish you a prosporous future restarting your life in Canada. Goodluck

Don't split them up!

Call me a hopeless romantic, but I'd hate to see Alex and Alexa date other people. I don't care what anyone else says, happy endings are amazing! I'd love to see them end up together and Alex's parents accept things somehow, but I love the series! Keep up the great work!

alex and alexa

great writing In my opinion I give ch.01 4-1/2 ch.02 4-1/2 ch.03 5 ch.04 5 ch.05 5 ch.06 4-1/2 ch.07 5 out of 5 stars. All chapters being exceptional, personal favorite ch.04 because of the wit in the story, obvious build up of previous chapters, the conclusiveness of the chapter which did not leave the reader waiting for the next chapter meanwhile still wanting it and the dialogue funny sexy with different languages very worldly.

Kudos all around

I think everything has been said already. I just had to climb on the bandwagon. Love your writing. You are now my favorite Lit author, hands down.

All 5s, all the time

Love this story and am overjoyed that you will be continuing it. Hope all goes well with the relocation back to Toronto and that you settle quickly. So looking forward to the continuation of Alex and Alexa........

Easily a favorite!

You are appreciated!!!!!!!

More

Where's the next chapter I can't wait any longer. Thanks for this.

Excellant author

I too will 5 star any and all of your stories. You have earned a spot at the top of my Favorite Authors list. I anxiously await the next chapter.

Next chapter

Jumping out of my pants waiting for 8!!!!