Suggest that you write some sequels. He should be fucking the pussies and asses of the women, including his sister, and ejaculating in those pussies and asses.
I'd like to second the request for further chapters. And I agree that you should take the time to develop the plot.. Still a greatly arousing tale. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous09/24/15
Dreadful
I hate stories where the writer tries to show off his/her knowledge of something or other (in this case wrestling) by writing it into a story. Appalling lack of imagination.
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Anonymous09/25/15
Idiotic "Dreadful" Comment...
What an moronic comment that your story is "dreadful" because you brought something like wrestling into the story. That commenter wouldn't know a good story, or how to write one, if it bit them in the face.
That uselessness aside, I'd echo the comment hoping for more chapters, preferably with the stories being at least a little longer and more detailed. Hopefully his stamina will increase. Thanks
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Good story
Suggest that you write some sequels. He should be fucking the pussies and asses of the women, including his sister, and ejaculating in those pussies and asses.
Series potential!
Hope to see some more chapters!
working with her
I could see him becoming Brenda's sparing partner or even her manager for the league while being her boyfriend on the side in future chapters.
#Great almost a 5
Only reason 4 not a 5 was it was a bit rushed,Would of loved the back story on how/why the sister & friend wanted to fuck him
And a shame you ended it here think could of been more chapters easly
More please!
I'd like to second the request for further chapters. And I agree that you should take the time to develop the plot.. Still a greatly arousing tale. Keep up the good work!
Dreadful
I hate stories where the writer tries to show off his/her knowledge of something or other (in this case wrestling) by writing it into a story. Appalling lack of imagination.
Idiotic "Dreadful" Comment...
What an moronic comment that your story is "dreadful" because you brought something like wrestling into the story. That commenter wouldn't know a good story, or how to write one, if it bit them in the face.
That uselessness aside, I'd echo the comment hoping for more chapters, preferably with the stories being at least a little longer and more detailed. Hopefully his stamina will increase. Thanks
Hey Dreadful comment writer
If you're going to write such a hateful and stupid comment, at least have the nuts to put your name to it an not "Anonymous"
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