A married couple having fun with each other...That's good...3*
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Anonymous09/24/15
Get an editor
Or do a better job of proof reading. I'm not the Grammar Police but so many errors make this hard to read. At least there are no cuckolds in sight. Thanks for that.
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Anonymous09/24/15
no cockold or sluts.
You sure you put this in the right category? Liked it.
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Anonymous09/24/15
Too short and undramatic to be really interesting, . . .
but nice to see she was feeding him only his cream pie! Wonder what they will try next?
There was no dialogue from either person, it was an okay story but dialogue would have made it so much better and it really did need to be proof read.
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Anonymous09/23/16
Cum eater !
Great subject. Needs better grammer, character development and dialogue expressing the person's feelings as they are pleasured. Keep it up. I'm thinking of eating out my wife after cumming in her pussy.
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Married couple having fun...
A married couple having fun with each other...That's good...3*
Get an editor
Or do a better job of proof reading. I'm not the Grammar Police but so many errors make this hard to read. At least there are no cuckolds in sight. Thanks for that.
no cockold or sluts.
You sure you put this in the right category? Liked it.
Too short and undramatic to be really interesting, . . .
but nice to see she was feeding him only his cream pie! Wonder what they will try next?
"My Husband and I"
Should be the title.
Needs dialogue
There was no dialogue from either person, it was an okay story but dialogue would have made it so much better and it really did need to be proof read.
Cum eater !
Great subject. Needs better grammer, character development and dialogue expressing the person's feelings as they are pleasured. Keep it up. I'm thinking of eating out my wife after cumming in her pussy.
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