Biscuit Hammer, I accidentally hit 3 when I rated this instead of 5! I'm so sorry!
Anyway, loved this chapter! I don't mind that they each had a boy to fuck, mom and Bron are still are crazy into one another. Bronwen is such a pretty name, btw!
Any chance of a three-way? That'd be hot.
This is my favorite lesbian incest story, hands down. Keep up the good work!
If I wouldn't have a female friend with a sex drive so strong she jumps everything short from a plague infested street dog I would be a bit horrified by this two. But luckily I have respect for women who do not hide their need and grab the chance when it presents itself.
As much as I enjoyed to see Bron getting her share of male-parts action I wouldn't mind if the next chapter is back to her and mom doing what they came to do best - pleasure each other. Though I bet that mom will describe what transpired in her bed and what her italian stallion had to show.
What I am a bit surprised it that there was never a mention of the guys name, well not that it mattered in any way, if there is ever a chance he'll come by again so this mother-daughter duo can have some 3-way fun with his pliant orifices. As a person he doesn't exactly strike me as someone worth having around for more than a few hours of fun.
Unfortunately I didn't enjoy this chapter as much as I did the previous ones I still did get a good read out of it and happily await for more. Maybe I'm too narrow-minded as this was labeled as lesbian incest story and you did warn about males popping up (pun not intended) here and there, do not refrain from repeating it. Sexual diversity is a good thing and I embrace it fully, it just didn't pique my interest as much as pure lesbian action did. Maybe it was the lack of teasing and warming-up that was spiced the previous instalments.
What I wanted to say is that I like how they were in that long teasing session with each other before jumping their bones and that prolonged play made it so much more rewarding in the end. With the men it's just straight to the point for a bit of action and good bye. This comes as no surprise since their relationship is rather unique and it would be stupid to expect their every encounter with other sex partners to bb the same. What they share is special and should be treated as such, and you managed to portrait it in great way.
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Anonymous09/26/15
The bi guy is the only thing that bothered me.
Otherwise, awesomely amazing story!!!!
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Anonymous09/27/15
Loved this
Well written, and having read the others in the series it all comes together nicely.
For a story about a lesbian relationship between a mother and daughter, this chapter was disappointing. I understand that new characters had to be brought in because how many chapters can you do containing the two main characters having sex again? But bringing in guys and having them be the main focus of a chapter just makes me think this is not the same story as was laid out in the previous chapters. Sorry.
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Anonymous10/02/15
Love this series!
What great slow erotic build up and then just some incredible sex with TONS of heavy making out/kissing which I absolutely love to do. You write very well, one of the better writers of stories on this site, so keep it up. Hope you have them going out all dressed up together with a hot, sexy, night out!
Your stories are great and I enjoy their plots and your descriptive phraseology but please read your work through before releasing it for publication and correct the auto-correct errors. If you give yourself a week or so between writing/finishing the story and your final edit before hitting the 'publish' button, you will also be able to pick up those odd missing words--of, to, and, etc-- and the typos that turn 'she' into 'he', and so on.
The alternative, of course is to find someone to proof-read your work before you release it for publication. A new set of eyes will often pick up errors we skim over because we have become so close to the story. Such an objective eye would pick up the mention of a high school link with the Pizza boy in Chapter Five that wasn't mentioned when he was first introduced into the story--something about "the mask you wore to the graduation"--and a couple of other editorial hiccups that interrupt the story's flow.
Having said my piece--which is meant to be nothing more than helpful, constructive criticism--please keep up the good work. You have a great deal of creative talent.
English
I'm sorry!
Biscuit Hammer, I accidentally hit 3 when I rated this instead of 5! I'm so sorry!
Anyway, loved this chapter! I don't mind that they each had a boy to fuck, mom and Bron are still are crazy into one another. Bronwen is such a pretty name, btw!
Any chance of a three-way? That'd be hot.
This is my favorite lesbian incest story, hands down. Keep up the good work!
- Cori
They sure are a pair of sluts
If I wouldn't have a female friend with a sex drive so strong she jumps everything short from a plague infested street dog I would be a bit horrified by this two. But luckily I have respect for women who do not hide their need and grab the chance when it presents itself.
As much as I enjoyed to see Bron getting her share of male-parts action I wouldn't mind if the next chapter is back to her and mom doing what they came to do best - pleasure each other. Though I bet that mom will describe what transpired in her bed and what her italian stallion had to show.
What I am a bit surprised it that there was never a mention of the guys name, well not that it mattered in any way, if there is ever a chance he'll come by again so this mother-daughter duo can have some 3-way fun with his pliant orifices. As a person he doesn't exactly strike me as someone worth having around for more than a few hours of fun.
Unfortunately I didn't enjoy this chapter as much as I did the previous ones I still did get a good read out of it and happily await for more. Maybe I'm too narrow-minded as this was labeled as lesbian incest story and you did warn about males popping up (pun not intended) here and there, do not refrain from repeating it. Sexual diversity is a good thing and I embrace it fully, it just didn't pique my interest as much as pure lesbian action did. Maybe it was the lack of teasing and warming-up that was spiced the previous instalments.
A bit I forgot to add
What I wanted to say is that I like how they were in that long teasing session with each other before jumping their bones and that prolonged play made it so much more rewarding in the end. With the men it's just straight to the point for a bit of action and good bye. This comes as no surprise since their relationship is rather unique and it would be stupid to expect their every encounter with other sex partners to bb the same. What they share is special and should be treated as such, and you managed to portrait it in great way.
The bi guy is the only thing that bothered me.
Otherwise, awesomely amazing story!!!!
Loved this
Well written, and having read the others in the series it all comes together nicely.
A step down from previous chapters
For a story about a lesbian relationship between a mother and daughter, this chapter was disappointing. I understand that new characters had to be brought in because how many chapters can you do containing the two main characters having sex again? But bringing in guys and having them be the main focus of a chapter just makes me think this is not the same story as was laid out in the previous chapters. Sorry.
Love this series!
What great slow erotic build up and then just some incredible sex with TONS of heavy making out/kissing which I absolutely love to do. You write very well, one of the better writers of stories on this site, so keep it up. Hope you have them going out all dressed up together with a hot, sexy, night out!
Constructives
Your stories are great and I enjoy their plots and your descriptive phraseology but please read your work through before releasing it for publication and correct the auto-correct errors. If you give yourself a week or so between writing/finishing the story and your final edit before hitting the 'publish' button, you will also be able to pick up those odd missing words--of, to, and, etc-- and the typos that turn 'she' into 'he', and so on.
The alternative, of course is to find someone to proof-read your work before you release it for publication. A new set of eyes will often pick up errors we skim over because we have become so close to the story. Such an objective eye would pick up the mention of a high school link with the Pizza boy in Chapter Five that wasn't mentioned when he was first introduced into the story--something about "the mask you wore to the graduation"--and a couple of other editorial hiccups that interrupt the story's flow.
Having said my piece--which is meant to be nothing more than helpful, constructive criticism--please keep up the good work. You have a great deal of creative talent.
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