All Comments on 'Good Man Pt. 01'

Love it looking forward to the next chapter

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I love the slow build up, him stepping into the unknown, very much looking forward to part 2.

Long and intriguing intro; full of promise. Very well written. Worth the time to read. Creates anticipation in both the reader and in Cameron

To allow some stranger complete control? No discussion of a safe word or limits? I don't think so. UGH!

I like the build up and am looking forward to chapter two! Good work! :)

Great to see someone who's willing to take their time and work up a slow burn without dragging. While its true that there has not yet been a negotiation of limits, it's still early days - he doesn't even know there's such a thing or why it's needed. He's in no danger yet, and she's working toward it I am sure. Loving it so far!

Nice setup. Looking forward to where this goes.

The scene is set, but nothing more. Could be good in subsequent chapters. Time will tell.

Interesting premise.

But merely a begining.

Four stars.