One Who Understands

You might want to let readers know before they get into the story that its 32 pages long.

Beautifull

I am sorry about the other comment towards the length, I found your story to ranked up with the greats on this site. I would say it is close to, "Thread Island" great storyline kept engross with Ed and what was happening next. Thank you .

OMG one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Hoping there will be an addition to this story. I loved the entire store including howlong it was. Please add to it.

Simply awesome

Going to look at your other submissions.

I want more

Why did you stop so soon ! . hope this is just the first chapter and to anon 32 pages so what for a story this excellent
With my luck this is all we will get from Ed, Grace and Rachel's new life

Thank you.

It Was Long

But I guess that is what I loved about it, it has just the right amount of everything
to keep one reading and wanting more.

Thank you !!!! M

wow

Got to be honest seen it was 32 pages I was about to say no not today but page one got my hooked cant say I didnt like how he when from lonely to bangin all the rich women very good I love this one keep it up

Great story.

I could sense the feelings of the women for Ed all thru the story. A bit long but the story does keep moving. Several times there were tears in my eyes, including the ending. Very good work, keep it up. If you should ever write more to this story please let us know. I have some female friends that I will be telling about this story.

Well Written

Great, well written episode and I would like to see you continue further along with the plot. Keep up the very good work. Lots of excitement and kept you hanging on until the ending.

Wow!

I too wasn't sure about initially getting caught up in a 32 pager right away, but, I was hooked. Well done! I look forward to more stories. I'm not sure if you plan to continue this one or not. It stands on it's own merit, if not. Thanks for writing.

Wow!

Totally mesmerizing!

The best

I have to admit, like others I was daunted initially seeing this story was 32 pages in length. Although I love the way the story unfolded and now I think that if it had been any shorter it wouldn't have been complete. Many thanks to the author of the best story I have read.

Wow

In all the years I have been here this is the best story by far!!!!

Please

Please add another chapter to this absolutely amazing story. Ive been reading stories on here for years and this is by far the best one I've ever read. The characters are simply amazing and i so want to see what else you could bring to this story

Brilliant!!

Absolutely awesome, you have serious talent and keep up the good work.

Absolutely awesome, you have serious talent and keep up the good work.

Page turner

Fantastic.... I stayed up all night so l could finish it. What a brilliant story..

Amazing

Couldn't stop reading till the end. My only critique has to do with a reference that I am not familiar with, so I can't really blame you for that and it doesn't detract from the story anyway. But, just out of curiosity, where do they refer to a cash register as simply a cash. Your attention to detail and character development made this story my absolute favorite on this site, or any other site for that matter. Would love to see a continuation, but can understand how it might seem gratuitous.
Hope to see more stories from you.

Truly Remarkable

Your story is amazing. It is a fabulously complex blend of erotica and romance and conflict and overcoming obstacles and social commentary. The erotica was hot and appealing for men and women. The depth of character development as well as the likability factor of the heroes and the eww/ick factor of the antagonists/villains was a key ingredient to the strength of the story. Great writing...consider expanding to full novels.

Absolutely wonderful

What can I add to the other comments?
This and the Shepherd are my true favorite stories.
Thank you for sharing them with us.

Wonderful

I started to read it at 9:00 PM and finished after 1:00 AM. I could not stop reading this wonderfully written story.You followed the story line from start to finish. I am now looking forward to a continued story. I hope? If you do continue this, I will start reading it earlier as it is hard to get up early for work.
Thank you again for this wonderful story.
Keith A. Neal

Wonder

Wonderful I don't know what to say about this wonderful story I have just read it was so magnificent I don't know what to say...

Fantastic

Awesome story, one of the best stories i have read on this site, perfect ending as well, i don't see any reason to continue this story. Continue the good work.
Ps. I love the story with Jack as well FYI .ds

Good story,

but long, very long. Luckily it was quite engrossing.

Always love your stories...this one too!!!!

Entertaining...passionate...kept me wanting to read more! Another first class tale...thanks!

Awsome

One of the best

What a great Story

Thank U for creating such a wonderful story. I hope there are some more chapters. Jamey

Might be one of the longest stories I've read here...

But also one of the best. There were laughs, tears and a whole lot of steamy sex scenes. Kudos for the amazing work!

Well done

A little sex an interesting workable plot with some twists....good job

Love it

It took all day but it was worth it, thank you.

My first 5 star award!

Congratulations on a very well written story! Wonderful storyline!

A great writing

I usually don't enjoy reading stories that are longer than 3 or 4 pages as they often drag out and lose the intended excitement of the story. This one I read the entire length of it. It was well worth the time to do so. A fantastic read as far as I'm concerned. A great story line that had both the sexual side and the reasonable normal life along with it. Again a great piece of writing.

Awesome!!

Couldn't stop reading!
Real!
Amazing!
5stars!

Top three of all time.

Your story was outstanding. It was well written and should be read by everyone who visits this site. I will be looking for more from this author.

Bravo!

One of the most in depth and best written works I have ever read... Words cannot begin to describe...

Wonderful

This story was well written and captivating. I put the rest of my series reading on hold just to be able to complete this story. If a sequel is planned I would love to have the chance to read it.

brilliant story

Sex without a story is just another description of erotic activity. This is so much more - an interesting story with twists and turns, added to which it was well written.
I really enjoyed it - compelling reading.

5 Stars is not enough for this MASTERPIECE.

This is the best erotic story I have ever read. The twists and turns made me want to keep reading. I will certainly look for this author in the future and I really hope a sequal is in the pipe line.

So many stories in one

Very well written. It could have very easily have been a different story or segment for each of the ladies. All would be winners on their own. Collectively it is brilliant.

Thanks, will we get to find out what happens next?

Fantastic story!

This was by far the longest story I have ever read on this site, and it just pulled me through every page. Bravo!

An amazing read

I usually don't go for long stories, as I prefer quick spank-the-monkey material, but your story is so bloody good, that I've been stuck reading it. I still just halfway, but I'm gonna finish it :).

Excellent!

I couldn't stop reading it once I started and finished it in a day. The story is very well written I loved every moment of it. I hope to read more works like this one in the future, if you aren't a professional writer I believe that you can be. Keep up the good work!

Absolutely amazing.

I normally don't read long stories here as i get bored quickly with the characters but this story kept me reading page after page. I hope for more to continue this story, maybe short stories with Ed's relationship with each women. If i voukd give you 6 stars i would.

Beyond well done

The only thing that could bug me is the Victoria ladies ending not being there as it would/could define now the violence carries on the end of the Eds character. That being said it was so good talent the full day reading it!!Well written and carried threw plotted story, well done writer and proof readers!
~KIA

Wow!

I loved your story and would read more. The judge episode was jarring. I don't care, because your characters are so alive. Thank you!

Add my "Wow!!" to the list. I just spent the whole morning of my day off reading this story. I couldn't put it down. I kept picturing Ed as the actor Patrick Warburton (google him and you'll see what I mean). Though most of the sex in the story wasn't incestuous, I'm glad it was in this category as it gave me a chance to read it. Definite five+ star story for those who can read something longer than a two page spanker read.

Amazing story!

Great read, I hope you continue with the story

Page 22:

"Heather looked at Ed in surprise. Those weren't cheap earrings and Ed never had much money. What changed?

Ed saw the question in Heather's eyes. "I got a performance bonus."

Isabelle snorted loudly and tried to cover it up by heading for the washroom with a wave. Her face was flushed."

I couldnt stop laughing at this, i havnt finished reading it but so far i cant stop from bursting out laughing every now n then. you definitely know how to write and captivate an audience!

Super Sexy

Best story I've read forever. Kept me focused all 32 pages. Loved the ending but wish it didn't. Going to look to see what else you've written.