One Who Understands

Wonderful story! I hope there is a sequel in the near future.

Wonderful read!

I loved the story! You don't find a story in this section very often that is well written, really enjoyable and mixes a good story with the sex, and is long enough that you don't feel left wanting for its abruptness!

I think I only noticed one slip where Ed was called Joe, then the huge mistake of not knowing where the hymen is located. ( like 80% of the authors in this section have no clue and don't bother to look at Google pictures, lol)
I loved the HVAC stuff mixed in! That was fun! Ed did forget to check the superheat/subcooling on one install, hehe, and I liked the info on the commercial install downtown!

I was beginning to think Grace was never going to get laid! Ha-ha ;)

Thanks for the great story!!

A Great Story...

A most enjoyable and sexually exciting story with some great sex and imagery in the details put forth in both the sex, Ed's work and the people in the story. Could be a movie...
Thanks for the entertainment .

Great story!

This story is extremely well written and read like a good book. The last 10 pages had me at the tip of my proverbial chair and left me wanting more.

Outstanding!

This is one of the better stories that I have read in a very long time. I appreciate the care you have taken to make it such an excellent reading experience. Definitely Five Stars and very well-deserved at that!

outstanding story

Outstanding story kept me wanting more and wishing there was a follow up story.

I have read many stories here and I rate this the best, Good job!

Great story line, excellent cast all making it wonderful reading!

Edward the Stupid

This guy is one dumb fuck isn't he? Perhaps all the grey matter and blood just flowed to the his cock making it big? 10 inch only? Please do yourself a favour and learn what a BBC is. Maybe if he'd been black nobody would have had the gall to diss his cock.

The best

The better themes in your fiction are together here. So this is really is your best story, Better than the shepherd

one of the best stories on the site1

the story was outstanding. the character development, the twists and turns were excellent. i read this story in one day. thank you for taking the time to write this story.

Adult at its best

I need more than 5 stars for this. Great characters and plot, lively pace. So good to have a decent sized story to get into. I very much look forward to reading more from this author.

Autistic Coded Protagonist

I don't know how many other people caught on, but Ed thinks, acts, and is described very much like a friend of mine who is high-functioning autistic. It was fantastic to see such a character portrayed as successful, loveable, and desirable. From the bottom of our respective hearts... thank you.

More please

A first I thought 32 pages would be hard to get thru waiting for the next 32 pages

One of the best I have read.

After reading many stories and being disappointed with many, I gave this one a try. No regrets. Great character development, great pacing and nice twists. Did I mention it has great sex too. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys more than just a stroke story. Looking forward to anything else this author has to share.

Just read this again!

Even better the second time...a true winner!!!!

Amazing!

Great Story, Good Development and great Pacing, While keeping the Great Sex for to cause the Fap'n'Go's to actualy Read! Great Ending on it as well. Can Possible Go Somewhere, maybe a few years down the line or such, but the story just ends in a Great Place, Without much if any questions or cliffhangers!

OMG!!

WOW!! That story is amazing. I could not stop reading; you had me captivated through to the end. Well Done!!!!!!!!

Too much sex, but so much love.

I don't think I've ever said too much sex on anything but this guy takes the cake. He also takes the cake on an amazing menage a trois.

Read the whole damn thing at once, lost my boner twice, came back both times, still finished at the end with Grace and Ed. Damn worth it.

So well done

Excellent story line. Plenty of sex but not an abundance of crude language.

Awesome story

I have read the story twice now and I made an account to let you know that I you are an excellent writer. I look forward to anymore you have like this one.

Great writing.

Great story. Lots of good sex but also you could see and feel the love. Can't wait to read more from you.

Great reading

Excellent story. One of the best that I have read. Definitely worth the time to read!!!

Great Story

One of the best

Wonderful story

Oh, what a gift you have with words. Wonderful story. What I love about it is the warmth and love you bring out in your characters. The sex is secondary but its hot and real. I want to believe fairy tales like these really do come true.

Anazing story....

Great characters
Great story...probably one of the best on this site.
Great interaction btwn the main people.
Just enuf sex....but great story-telling....truly talented.
Amazing character understanding...
10/10

Fantastic story and storyteller. Excellent mix of sex and story. More, please.

Great.

Amazing

Decent and eroticism at its peak... Please keep writing..

Please continue

A great story please continue

great story

One hell of a story. Please continue it would like to know what happens to them

Too Long

The story was great but it was too long and too much information

Great story

Don't worry, it's not too long and is filled with the kind of information I like. It's more like a book and I would love to see it written into one. I would love to hear what happens to Ed and his abilities, not only in the bedroom, but his skills as a human being and knowledge as a person who really knows his stuff in the business world. We could hear more about the Doc and Heather, what would happen to Mrs. Rutledge and the rotten dealings of the now deceased judge. Good stuff and excellent writing!

Wonderful

this was more like a book and i enjoyed every page. Thanks

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Who the fuck is Joe?!

Intriguing story!

I loved how you developed the storyline and characters. It certainly captured my attention and made it very difficult to put down! Fabulous job!

A great read

Lots of humor and a tenderness throughout made this a very enjoyable story. I wouldn't be here if I wanted reality. Yes, this was a fantasy at times, but well told fantasy has the power to transport the reader and this story accomplished that. Thanks!

Beautiful Story

I must say this was one of the best stories I've read... and I'm not just referring to erotic literature. It had me engrossed start to finish. Fantastical as it was, it still felt believable and the characters were relatable. It took me on an emotional ride and truly made me feel what the characters felt. I found myself really caring about the characters.
The only critique I have is, I was really looking forward to Grace and Edward's union, it was dissapointing to me that Rachel was involved and it wasn't a more personal connection between them. They had loved each other for a lifetime and suppressed thier desire for each other for so long, I was really looking forward to thier emotional connection upon finally making love. I felt it should have been much more personal between them. Hell, they were never alone together. Even as they professed their love for one another. I would have liked to see much more emphasis on them coming together and the emotional aspects of finally living their love and desire out. They were the main characters after all.
Like I said, that was my only let down. Other than that aspect, it was a great story. I can't wait to see if you've written anything else about Edward, Grace and all of their friends. Thank you.

A Magnificent story!

A story worthy of the highest grades! Your attention to the smallest details is worthy alone! That you took the time to let us enjoy you story to its fullest says a lot about your writing skills and imagination! I find it best that this story is all about love, it's not perfect, and somehow I think you meant that, always drawing us in, then the story changed... Always returning to his love!

I love the length of this story; no pun intended:) it's perfect!

I'm hoping you'll write more of these magnificent stories!

Thank you so much!

Fantastic, I wish there was more. I've enjoyed this more than any other story I have read. Very well written. Thank you

How about a book?!

What a great story, how about a couple more stories to make an anthology book?!

More

Please... more please this story was amazing! If you do more could you maybe make it to where he definitely ends up with Grace?

WOW!!

One of the best stories I have ever read!!
I love the part Grace & Rachel play!!

sorry but the writing isn't that good

It was entertaining, and the storytelling was magnificent, as MANY have pointed out. However, from a technical standpoint the writing wasn't very good. It's as if we're looking at a first draft--give it two more edits and it will be very good. Some places were difficult to follow when you confused who was speaking. The worst was ob page 30, about hakfway down, you said "Joe" when I think you meant "Ed". Also there were grammatical errors and the writing style was choppy. I gave the story 3 stars overall, because although it's weak writing, it's very good storytelling.

Wow wonderful

Wow wonderful story... the best one I have read till date....hope to read more episodes of this story in future....

The Best

This is by far one the best stories I have read & the longest, I just wish I could be one Ed's mates in real life, so I could stand by his side & give him a fist bump or a hi-five, also if I had been a apart of his life at school, when I saw the size of his weapon in the showers after the game, I would have warned him about how all of the girls would be either falling all over themselves to get at it or running away from it, to make sure he wouldn't be ashamed of his gift or cursed because of it, as only mates can do.

Wow

Wow. That was amazing. Hot in many places and then there is those awwwww moments that just melt you on the inside. Terrific story even with the errors

Anon discussing editing mistakes

The irony of your post about mistakes was incredibly delicious. 10/10 Would pair with Chiante

First ever comment for me

This story was so well written and entertaining that I stayed up till 3 am on a work night reading it. Absolutely phenomenal.

Absolutely Amazing!!!!!!

I can not remember the last time I read something so engrossing and entertaining. Very well written...the characters where very well developed...it has made it hard to read anything else with the same enthusiasm as I have read this...I could not stop reading this until I finished it. Unbelievable talent. I'll be looking for more work from this writer. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with the rest of us.

Best story on Literotica

I couldn't walk away from this once I started to read it. the ending was perfect.

bah

got halfway through and i just stopped. it's not for reading in one sitting, i got tired of reading ed being stupid and naive. at first it was hot when he started fucking milfs but then it went on and on, made me realize he was the cable guy in all those old school porn, the story did not progress, what a waste. the start was interesting but then it became a gratuitous stroke story at the middle and i skipped pages but there he was, getting it on again in another fucking mansion with another fucking milf. maybe i'll pick this up again.