Emma, I love your stories! Especially this one - stories involving the whole family are my favorite. I do hope we will be seeing further chapters involving Sarah - and maybe Mom too?
I really like this series, but would love some more length to them. If you could build up the characters more slowly so we begin to relate to them, rather than just jumping straight in the deep end, I think they'd be better.
Just an idea.
Your stories are very good. You put us right into the beds and bodies of people in the stories.
Well now that Nadine has done both, brother and daddy; we need sharh to join in. Please keep your good stories Cumming! I love the bellies, breasts, and oh! so sweet womanhoods that drip honey!
Oh my! I'm old and about to have a fucking stroke reading this amazing story! Please continue. I promise to keep my nitro close...Now, what happens to Sarah?
So totally hot!!! I'd love to be a part of that family and be fucked like that.....please tell us more!!!
good work Emma...keep it up! mine is up for you
Lovely Story, and a real Turn-On. I am an 81 y.o. man and was reminded of the time when my own daughter seduced me, and we fucked like rabbits the whole night. But that is almost 30 years ago. But to-day, I got a nice hard-on, like I haven't had for a long time, and I made good use of it! I too hope we'll soon see the follow-up that is promised by the mention of Sarah appearing on the scene!
Wanna hear what happens with Sarah.
Sara or Sarah?
Where's number 3? Please.
why did u quit writting these stories I have read are really good.
did she join in? more please.......
The story just got better. Your stories seem to be short and to the point!
It's a nice change, especially when time is short. We all know why we're here and you deliver! Your charactors still are fleshed out sufficiently to appreciate them, which is difficult in the space you're allowing. The "Dave" series is the first I've read of your works. Great stuff!!
gets fucked by both her daddy and her brother. Dad and bro can egg each other on with dirty talk and joking. You can bet the young lady's adorable little cunt is going to be worked over real good by the big hard cocks of the family males, it's going to be family-semen clogged from now on.
With two bowl's and two stir sticks available in the same kitchen, the breakfast should be really yummy. Your story is hot and a little comical at the same time. Thanks for your efforts, I did, thoroughly enjoy it. Now Sarah gets involved?
Sorry but who is Sarah?
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