All Comments on 'Setting as Character in Erotica'

. . . the power from those hints of settings . . . my God, she showed right here—on the enclosed instructions—these settings-characters that, like floating ghosts, appear for their appropriate moment leaving this reader increasingly open to the suggestions these characters load into his mind until, primed and focused, he begins to imagine what the married couple did while all around them the singles joined them in listening to the enthusiastic banging in the tent next door that drew them all inside the world of lust. What, he thought, would legerdemer do with that setting one day.

After reading this article I kicked back in my living room recliner to read it again, a little slower this time. The article made me quite aware of how little I'd described the settings of the last few stories. Many thanks for providing a fine example of how to do it while at the same time educating us as to how to do it.

Nice description of what's required. Thank you