The Office

Author, please clarify. Is she the wife or just some hot young thing he picked up at a bar? Makes a difference in how the reader responds to the story. If reader is spending effort trying to figure it out then it is harder to enjoy your naughty parts.

Confusion

Hot story, but one thing was a bit confusing... It mentions that when he drops the duffle bag on the desk beside her, she recognizes the sound of the flogger inside. Then she is being smacked with a crop?

please clarify

Is this his wife or a piece he is seeing on the side? Its unclear who she is. Depending on who she is will help direct the interpretation of the story.

I hope that's his wife

Or if it's not, I hope his wife knows about it and that they have an open marriage. Stories about cheating spouses--whether it's the husband or wife--tends to take away from the experience for most people. It makes the otherwise hot and steamy sex scenes end up looking cheap and offputting.

Sensual and Hot

Sexy office story. But there isn't enough detail .Who is she,the wife, the lover ? What do they look like?How long have they known each other . Definitely some more detail.Hope there's more to this story ! I enjoy the office ones.