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Mature story?
How does this story fit in the mature category?
Good story -- hot and sexy ...
... but what is it doing in Mature? Five stars anyway!
Great start!
It sounds like the jock and slut crowd I went to school with. We had a couple of late bloomers like her and boy oh boy did they turn the established social order onto its' ear.
It would be good to follow her through the school year and see what mayhem she can manage.
Well written and you handled creating believable characters nicely. Your writing flows through the story perfectly. Keep up the good work.
My mistake
I didnt realize the mature category until now. I'm very sorry if you expected an older woman. Next time I'll make sure I'm not too tired to put it in the right category.
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