This a great series and I am pleased you are picking up the loose ends with Cricket. Sounds as if there is more of a story to be had there. Also with the potential customers on the lake. Much earlier in the story it was mentioned that Ali was talking about her intimate life with her aunt Natalie with the intimation that her mother was not approachable over such matters. It would be nice to revisit that item so that Gwen and Ali find they can talk openly (and also find what Ali and Natalie had talked about in a little more detail). These are only suggestions but I think the story is great - 5*
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Anonymous09/29/15
Always happy to see another chapter!
This felt like one of those nice catch-your-breath chapters; colouring in the characters a bit and setting up more action down the road. I can't believe this series has been running since 2013. Keep up the good work and I hope the next wait isn't too long!
I love the quality of writing, the way nothing is too rushed and the myriad options the carefully constructed storyline affords the author. I'm particularly looking forward to when/if Gwen's relationship with Cricket moves beyond mere advice, and wondering if Gwen will ever model for a second photoshoot herself. A five star instalment. I'm looking forward to the next one already.
You have done some detailed research into the various vibrators available (or is there some first hand familiarity?).
A very good chapter, had a relaxed feel. Nice to witness Gwen and Natalie together, this chapter felt like a nice piece of exposition. Looking forward to Cricket's accepting her gifts. T'will be exciting, I warrant.
And in referring to the bathrooms remodeling... Is Tim about to be seduced?
English
Keep going
Another great chapter. Thanks for the terrific story.
Good to have another chapter in the story
This a great series and I am pleased you are picking up the loose ends with Cricket. Sounds as if there is more of a story to be had there. Also with the potential customers on the lake. Much earlier in the story it was mentioned that Ali was talking about her intimate life with her aunt Natalie with the intimation that her mother was not approachable over such matters. It would be nice to revisit that item so that Gwen and Ali find they can talk openly (and also find what Ali and Natalie had talked about in a little more detail). These are only suggestions but I think the story is great - 5*
Always happy to see another chapter!
This felt like one of those nice catch-your-breath chapters; colouring in the characters a bit and setting up more action down the road. I can't believe this series has been running since 2013. Keep up the good work and I hope the next wait isn't too long!
Another amazing instalment.
I love the quality of writing, the way nothing is too rushed and the myriad options the carefully constructed storyline affords the author. I'm particularly looking forward to when/if Gwen's relationship with Cricket moves beyond mere advice, and wondering if Gwen will ever model for a second photoshoot herself. A five star instalment. I'm looking forward to the next one already.
Can't wait
To see what tomorrow morning will bring. Also the moment when Gwen gives Cricket her gifts is ripe with possibility.
Research
BusyBadger,
You have done some detailed research into the various vibrators available (or is there some first hand familiarity?).
A very good chapter, had a relaxed feel. Nice to witness Gwen and Natalie together, this chapter felt like a nice piece of exposition. Looking forward to Cricket's accepting her gifts. T'will be exciting, I warrant.
And in referring to the bathrooms remodeling... Is Tim about to be seduced?
Thanks.
When
When can we expect more of this on going series?
Excellent as allways.
So enjoy the way the story moves. Great stuff here.
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