by Eyeslikestars
There we go... so much knowledge and sex and plot in this chapter. Some people underestimate how much can be conveyed in a single Lit page, but their pages are quite large, yes?
I have no real advice, cause you seem to have this well in hand.
"Better to fill her head with useful information that something she could do nothing about."
should be:
"Better to fill her head with useful information thaN something she could do nothing about."
The error is just small enough that it is confusing.