All Comments on 'What Price Power? Ch. 02'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 8 years ago
Marvelous second chapter

There we go... so much knowledge and sex and plot in this chapter. Some people underestimate how much can be conveyed in a single Lit page, but their pages are quite large, yes?

I have no real advice, cause you seem to have this well in hand.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

"Better to fill her head with useful information that something she could do nothing about."

should be:

"Better to fill her head with useful information thaN something she could do nothing about."

The error is just small enough that it is confusing.

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