Your writing is really good, Actually seems like a story rather than pornographic film with terrible acting.
And as to the above comment. Come can be used as well.. for the past tense of "cum" would still be came, and as such it's silly to assume that come couldn't be used.
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review of "Anya Ch. 06"
Outstanding! Very sexy, very loving!
"Come" is spelled "cum" btw
ya come isnt spelles come its spelled cum
good story.
Your writing is really good, Actually seems like a story rather than pornographic film with terrible acting.
And as to the above comment. Come can be used as well.. for the past tense of "cum" would still be came, and as such it's silly to assume that come couldn't be used.
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