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Truck Stop Blonde

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/30/15

and

3 months later his dick rotted away lol

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by impo_6109/30/15

This is just a fantasy...

This is just a fantasy...The writer said it in the beginning and some facts confirm that: 1st - A disease free environment; 2nd - Truckers always have a gun in the cabin, what could his fantasy big size do against that? Nothing...3rd - They moved in the truck cabin as if they were in an hotel room...4th - In a fantasy we can have the biggest cock in the world, type Guiness...2*

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by Anonymous09/30/15

Gave you a 5 for your effort

and content

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by Anonymous09/30/15

I masturbated to it!!!

Came hard and squirted, too...and I'm not even a trucker's woman.

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by Anonymous09/30/15

Written by a ten year old

Get an editor. Then get a decent story line. The conclusion to an absolutely horrible day in the LW section. UGH!

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by Anonymous09/30/15

re: Gave you a 5 for your effort

What effort? Ya mean the shitty writing, e.g. the lack of quotation marks? How about the cliche and by-the-numbers characters, though caricatures would be a better description? Ya mean THAT "effort"?

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by thebuffalo10/01/15

This piece needs proof reading and editing.

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by Anonymous10/01/15

Gave you a 2*

for a very poorly written story!

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by Anonymous10/01/15

Wow.

This is really fucking bad. Stop fucking trying.

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by Tw0Cr0ws01/15/16

gave it a 1* for no effort

Yes, I know dialog is hard to write, but at least quotation marks would show that you tried.

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