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3 months later his dick rotted away lol
This is just a fantasy...
This is just a fantasy...The writer said it in the beginning and some facts confirm that: 1st - A disease free environment; 2nd - Truckers always have a gun in the cabin, what could his fantasy big size do against that? Nothing...3rd - They moved in the truck cabin as if they were in an hotel room...4th - In a fantasy we can have the biggest cock in the world, type Guiness...2*
Gave you a 5 for your effort
and content
I masturbated to it!!!
Came hard and squirted, too...and I'm not even a trucker's woman.
Written by a ten year old
Get an editor. Then get a decent story line. The conclusion to an absolutely horrible day in the LW section. UGH!
re: Gave you a 5 for your effort
What effort? Ya mean the shitty writing, e.g. the lack of quotation marks? How about the cliche and by-the-numbers characters, though caricatures would be a better description? Ya mean THAT "effort"?
This piece needs proof reading and editing.
Gave you a 2*
for a very poorly written story!
Wow.
This is really fucking bad. Stop fucking trying.
gave it a 1* for no effort
Yes, I know dialog is hard to write, but at least quotation marks would show that you tried.
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