The Present

A bunch of rape shit. Ashon, get your pimpled face ass out of the basement and get a life.

Kidnapping,

Battery, and Rape, I thought by some of your other stories you had your shit together and stopped writing rape stories.

My god. Non-consent in the non-consent section. Appalling.
What next. The deflowering of virgins in the first time section?

Well I liked it

I don't know what's wrong with the other two commenters, but after reading their bullshit comments, I feel obliged to say this definitely one of the best nonconsent stories on this site- even though it's not really as much nonconsent as it is reluctance (so angry commenters get your panties out of their bunch cos this is nothing compared to some stories). Definitely sexy. I want a Gordon XD

Agreed.

Why do people read stories in categories they aren't comfortable with? IMHO, it's so they can get their kicks and then hide behind the guise of being offended. Accept your perversity or don't read the posts. You're not fooling anyone.

i agree

its a non consent section so dont get on ur moral high ground this iis porn ergo non reality,its meant to be a fantasy!

i really enjoyed her character and it was told from he rpoint of view,,it was good