All Comments on 'The Gentle Intruder'

by DeeAnne

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Now that's a great dream!

This is one well paced, exciting seduction scenes, even if it is a nonconsent dream. I could see this being doen between lovers, and as a dream's suggestion, an dif this were real life, I have the feeling it might be played out soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Wow

That was one of the sexiest stories I've read in a long time. It was erotic, yet gentle and loving. And the ending took me by surprise! Great story!

heavenkittyheavenkittyover 19 years ago
One of my favorite fantasies!!!!

That was a great story, really well written... the way it ended was awesome!! Please write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Delicious!

Ooh, thank you for a wonderful story! When I was a teenager, I fantasised about a princely intruder climbing up to my tower and overpowering me; making sweet love to me despite my protestations ... this was even better than that fantasy.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623almost 4 years ago
Odd . .

That what started out as rape was actually a fantasy for her. To get past their shyness maybe? Loved it! Please keep writing and I’ll keep reading!!!

Client8Client8over 2 years ago

Very nice- a little mystery, a smidge of trepidation and a boat-load of romance

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