All Comments on 'Years Ago'

Very nice simple and smooth reading poem until the last line. You should consider altering it (IMHO).

A bright little observation that didn't really knock me off my feet, made me quite nostalgic. I wanna go back there too.

(and I love that last line)

Very nice poem. I love the smell of grass and moist earth, and it brought that back to me. Funny thing about the last line though...

LOL

It has the making of a really lovely poem....JUST misses the mark (for me). But well done!

I gave it a personal "wow", but "streaking jewel" fell short. Otherwise, loved it!