Normally I really look forward to your stories, but this one left me a little dazed and confused. It looks like the story has ended by your request for votes, but as far as I can tell, nothing really happened in any of the 11 chapters. Did I miss something? You set up a vast number of scenarios that could have been hot to read and left me salivating for more. But nothing happened in any of them?? Ed
I hit send instead of edit on my last comment. so this is a continuation of that post. Ed -------- I also saw that it is to be continued, so hopefully it will all come together for me. I can personally see so many ways for Susan to be in control of the family and have some great fun. looking forward to more. Ed
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Really confused
Normally I really look forward to your stories, but this one left me a little dazed and confused. It looks like the story has ended by your request for votes, but as far as I can tell, nothing really happened in any of the 11 chapters. Did I miss something? You set up a vast number of scenarios that could have been hot to read and left me salivating for more. But nothing happened in any of them?? Ed
Opppsssssss
I hit send instead of edit on my last comment. so this is a continuation of that post. Ed -------- I also saw that it is to be continued, so hopefully it will all come together for me. I can personally see so many ways for Susan to be in control of the family and have some great fun. looking forward to more. Ed
End It
Either fuck Brett and Erin or end it. This thing is VERY tiring. Too much intrigue.
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