All Comments on 'Beer Pong'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Get up.

Kick him in the balls so hard he loses a testicle and then leave and never go back. Disgusting.

storiesformyboyfriendstoriesformyboyfriendover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your comment!

Thanks for your response, Anonymous. I take it you did not read the last few sentences of the text - this was simply a fantasy of a ROLEPLAY! My boyfriend would never, ever rape me. But thank you for your concern and never lose that fire! More people need to understand the severity and awfulness of rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I like your story, very well written, very hot.

I feel like Literotica should put tags for their story's near the title. It's all different strokes for different folks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story!

Loved this, specially the last line. A bit of a mind fuck for the reader but it only makes the story better :) great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You...uh...HAVE to keep writing! Im serious! That was so perfectly rough and well-written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

I didn't get a feel that is was violent rape at all. Sounded like rough sex with a 'forced sex' undertone. She loved it and never once screamed no or stop. I wish I had a man like that... Mmmm!

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