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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/19/07

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It's either a case of a little seduction

or

It's the first 2 lines in your other poem, 4mw.

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by duddle14602/08/07

Exquisite.

A lovely little snippet ~ enhanced by its brevity.

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by tazz31707/13/12

SMOKE HIDES FLAWS

like pressure crushes. TK U MLJ LV NV

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