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by Angeline12/19/03

Dear Jazzy Poet

This poem makes me think of Count Basie's piano playing, where the space speaks as loud as the notes and together the two sing something wonderful. The somewhat ambiguous nature of its images give it staying power, like a fascinating, slightly blurred photograph that one is drawn to understand.

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by tazz31706/16/12

WHY AM I TO MAKE YOU

the connotations are too numerous to think. TK U MLJ LV NV

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