4 Moms 4 Aidan Ch. 01

Would love to read how he fucks his friend's mothers when his friends are around

O'my what a story!!!

wonderfully done. Just the right. Length with a good pace. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. I'm looking so forward to the conquest of the other three. Thank you. Job well done.

Loved it

thanks for a real passionate story, well written and plausible.
Lucky boy.
Can't wait for more.

Great start to this......

series. Can't wait for the next installment!!

incorrect uses of tense

While it was a good read, there are a number of incorrect uses of tense. For example - a thousand times, but none match the reality. SHOULD read "...a thousand times, but none matched the reality."

no is no

Even if she is thinking similar, when they say no and stop, rape is rape. No matter how much you think they enjoy or want it.
Fantasy is fun, but when faced with reality of breaking vows, no means no.
Seduction must go both ways or this should go into the nonconsent category. Just saying.

LOVED IT !!!!!

Loved it . Looking forward to more of this story Keep them CUMMMMMMMINGGGG !!!!!

Excellent concept and heated action

More tangled emotions and please make Aidan progressively more challenged with each quasi-mom /milf . I enjoyed the bike outing tryst as opposed to tired old home rondevous because friend and husband are absent.

Loved the story. Glad to see two more chapters written already. Hope the Milf's use a little more dirty talk when they fuck him in subsequent chapters. That's very hot.

I agree with mybikecruises

Enjoyed the story but should be in NONCONSENT!

He raped his supposed best friends mother and someone he considered a mother!
Aiden is a messed up guy who thinks he can take whatever he wants! I can go on and on about how messed up he is .... But nobody here will care ... Just a good stroke story!

Like I said change the category and all my arguments will go away .

for assholes

who can't cum in reality

The king of the Lit. assholes is dear annony

If you don't believe me, just ask his wife, ex-wife. I gave this story a 5 for effort and content.

Excellent Story

You have a talent for writing this kind of story. I found myself in envy of Aiden. I fucjed a friend's mother for a whole summer when I was in college. One of those fond memories that I will never forget. I can't wait the next one.

Good story so far. Needs better editing, e.g. peddling or pedalling?

Bad

There are all kinds of careless errors, listing every woman's bra size - and of course they're all stacked - boring and dumb.

The small group began chatting as they had some distance to the party.

I stopped reading at this point. The concept may have been good, but the execution was awful.

such an...

amoral beast is Aidan - pity - he does seem somewhat likeable in spite of his failings.

My God Man

Get a fucking editor

The story isn't that bad,but your execution of it? Gimme a break

it's pretty...

much rape...too bad

Descent but the whole rape and sociopathic personality was off putting. If the rest it is like this i have no reason to want to continue.

Are you so short that your characters have to be below 5'7"? Inferiority complex?