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by SeemaNaaz

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
maybe

this is not for you? but keep at it for now. shorter with more cure might help. Yes, we girls do love guy's Philly Cheese Steaks with the white cheese whizz, they just pull out to quick.

tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
NOTES FOR A DIARY

for wishes un-fulfilled. TK U MLJ LV NV

saleem22003saleem22003over 8 years ago
WOW

Welcome to the erotic authors world , your first poem is so sensual and erotic , what will happen further it's so nice feeling you get you here seema

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years ago
Seemaji , give us an English ghazal next , liberally sprinkled with Urdu ........

We shall do " Wah , Wah !! "

guysimple1674guysimple1674over 3 years ago
Sets the mood

Your eroticism sets the mood right! The slow ignition is caught well... would love to hear more from you!

SeemaNaazSeemaNaazover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks dear guys for your encouraging comments.

Sman4444Sman4444over 2 years ago

I love an appreciative and reciprocating woman!

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47 years old Desi housewife mother of 2 sons .Read and write Erotic urdu English stories and bold poetry . . I like erotic stories and poetry I write bold and erotic poetry /shairy