All Comments on 'It's A Wrap Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I would love to know how Alex got into that situation in the first place.

bubblepopmeibubblepopmeiabout 13 years ago

its so wonderful! i want to do porn so i can so relate to this. i love the chloroform reference too. well done

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
too many errors

you need an editor. there are a lot of simple to fix errors that distracted me from the story.

cdmikeycdmikeyabout 6 years ago
Well done

the store was nice and it had me going, looking forward to the next chapter.

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