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5
for effort and a great story
five
Fine series
Lucky husband
This husband was lucky that his slut wife did not sex with him. A lot of STDs avoided him. The newest STD is HPV (Human Papilloma Virus) causes Orolaringho Cancer through pussy eating after 10-20 years................
The end...
I liked the story...maybe a little dense, but the end wasn't right with all what he thought and suffered: "Rest in peace Ruth. I'm glad you're finally gone," said Jay when tossing a single rose in her open grave."...It should have been: ""Rest in Hell Ruth. I'm glad you're finally gone there" he said while tossing a single rotten rose in her open grave.!!! However 3*
Are you kidding!
You put me through all that reading for that for that let down of an ending? Your story could have been shorter but, apparently you had a predetermine word count to meet.
The story idea was okay but, there was no follow up to the words spoken by the main character about his treatment. Ten chapters of belly aching and then nothing don't rewrite because I will not read it.
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