Danny Ch. 01

OMG

You do realize your writing erotica and not an episode of the Waltons, Right?

All that

Sugar shit sounds like a street whore talking to a trick.

I worked with a girl named Pauline French

LOL I wish I had got "her" :-)

Dude, do you know any OTHER female names except PAULINE FRENCH?

Good Story

This is much less erotic than I would have expected. That is, there are lots of sexual moments but practically no tension unless you buy into his fear of being dropped which all goes back to Amanda. You know, I would have liked to hear what kind of
absurd explanation that Amanda was going to offer for her behaviour.

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Classic JPB! Keep going!

good story bob

great to see you writing again.

Damnit bob

It's so good to see you back I just commented the other day if anyone heard from you, miss them loving wives tales you do, I'm sure u got another frank and someone ready to go... Hell do a frank and cookie 2

neither one wants a long term relationship

and are both counting down the days till the other one moves on.

it should be interesting