All Comments on '4 Moms 4 Aidan Ch. 02'

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CentralJerseyGirlCentralJerseyGirlover 8 years ago
Loved it

This got me so aroused! Middle-aged women really do have fantasies along these lines. Nice start to my weekend - thank you

ap2techap2techover 8 years ago
Evil seducer

He's a spawn of the devil! On the other hand, I love it!! Is the plan to impregnate the ladies? That would make it even more interesting.

I hope the next two are as good as these two were.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

great story need to get the other moms fucked as well. cant wait to read the two others

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 8 years ago
The buildup and carnal action are impeccable

But the back story and differences between these four milfs aren't being played up. I admire what's here but where's the danger , betrayal and risk element ? Sorry I'm being unapologetically greedy but the setup was and is so rife f9or mayhem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great writing, but Juvenile outcome

He is gonna bang every "mom" without getting caught at least by one son(or husband if there is one in the picture)?Don't get me wrong, I like your style, but I think you need to put a bit of "real life" in the picture.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
pediatrician - can write a morning after pill script

so the pregnancy danger is <0

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
forceful

the next one should be a bit on the force and taken against her will and then fucked again the next day (so against her will)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story

This was a great story. I hope the 18 year old stud finds other sexy older women to plead for his hard young cock.

xylem69xylem69over 8 years ago
typical story

typical story by this author.

Central jersey girl why did you stop writing? You have a knack for hot female POV stories please continue

amoroneamoroneover 8 years ago
Wonderful

Fullfilling all teenage boys' dreams. What a brilliant story, well written, quality content and so erotic, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
HoTT mom

Damn that was awesome. Any moms in michigan that needs a good pounding.!???

DarkDickRisesDarkDickRisesover 4 years ago

Guys if anyone reads this.. can you suggest similar stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Mrs. R.

I’m sensing a theme here... Still fun to follow this story line.

Again, the grammar issues are popping up. Aiden’s father is ‘immersed’ in out of town business, not ‘emerged‘ in out of town business. That kind of thing just kills the flow...

I wouldn’t mind checking out (and more) these hot moms for myself...!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great Story the young stud is sure taking good care of the ladies. Great story Aidan is really a stud he is just been just Fucking the girls senceless. Five Stars RW

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGalealmost 2 years ago

This series just keeps getting better, looking forward to more..................():\

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