All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

it was a sweet story, I liked it. where does it go from here?- does he stay with her does she go to Germany?

I thought things moved a bit too fast for their first meeting. I like it when a story provides more detail about what each partner is doing.

I echo the comments in "Not bad for your first story" and "Good Read" . I did enjoy the flow and the story itself. Flesh it out some more.... may be a chapter 2. Keep writing please.