Hot and Horny story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this was at terrible story. When someone writes, it is so telling about their own life. This writer is a desperate loser guy who doesn't get laid and he failed miserably at portraying a female protagonist.
The grammatical and spelling errors can easily be overlooked. But NO woman I've ever known would go on a 2 week trip and leave her makeup bag behind.
Left it hanging! Went from three stars to two
short but sweet & lovely!
You could of added a end, like the comment above me said, you left the story hanging.
made me wet
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Nice !
Hot and Horny story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this was at terrible story. When someone writes, it is so telling about their own life. This writer is a desperate loser guy who doesn't get laid and he failed miserably at portraying a female protagonist.
Not a bad story.
The grammatical and spelling errors can easily be overlooked. But NO woman I've ever known would go on a 2 week trip and leave her makeup bag behind.
Just
Left it hanging! Went from three stars to two
Good
short but sweet & lovely!
End of story?
You could of added a end, like the comment above me said, you left the story hanging.
nice
made me wet
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