All Comments on 'The Resort Pt. 01'

Hot! Could use some editing, but all long stories have hiccups.

Overall amazing, eager for more!

Took fucking forever to get to any plot or twist or any kind of climax

enjoyed it. atleast you made a nice description of the resort. nice buildup. hoping for the next parts.

Stories that build a plot and tantalize the reader into submission are perfect for this forum. A bit of editing and another chapter with a quicker build up of hot sex should captivate more readers. I look forward to new installments. 1F

Slow buildup but worth it in the end. Love a good domination thru sweet coercion.

Thanks for the feedback. This was my first story.

Great effort, loved the slow build up and the detailed descriptions looking forward to part 2

Great begining. Looking forward to additional parts and developments. Thanks,

Great story but a little spoilt by the English ... poor should be pour, heal heel and your you're etc. Look forward to next instalment.

Hot!! Loved his dominating character, an awesome build up and attention to detail, and I love that you named her Rachel btw. There has to be more to this story. Can't wait!

Like many others I love the attention to detail. Also I loved the bad boy dominating figure as well as the strong but feminine Rachel. Well done!! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Well written ; terrific story !

Well written and fun to read. Hope you follow up with part two quickly

Fuck, my bags are packed!!

Great writing, not only on the sexual parts but the character details and how much and how gradually she game into him. So well done!!

Congrats!!!

one of the best!!

They should add a category for this type of stories where the girl is reluctant at first but eventually ends up enjoying it.