Monster of ID Arisen

harsh lessons

hey, so, that was unexpected! thought it was interesting, needs to be longer as i think it was bit if a whirlwind, not terrifically erotic if at all but hmm...good luck . sopharoones

A mans delusional thinking after he snaps or something more? I had so many questions at the end of this. But maybe that's what was intended. That's what some stories are meant to do...leave you wondering and filling in the blanks.

This was one of those stories for me. It left me vaguely unsettled and wondering. An extremely well written story.

You sure as hell can spin a yarn, MST. Very well done.

An interesting read

The story was interesting, although the editing detracted from it. And if I didn't know better, it read almost like a parable for a sheep lost from the fold. But no, you wouldn't do that... would you? 😉