Sounds like more is coming (no pun intended). A full family orgy would be nice. Not real believable but still fun. Gave 5 stars because it was arousing and the writing itself was not to bad. Please write more, I will read it.
max052
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Anonymous10/05/15
believable - maybe not - but damn good story. hope there is more following
English
More
Sequel Please
Interesting
But I found it very hard to read.
agree with
Averygoodlay except didn't think it was interesting,Was stupid made no sense
Rather good...
Sounds like more is coming (no pun intended). A full family orgy would be nice. Not real believable but still fun. Gave 5 stars because it was arousing and the writing itself was not to bad. Please write more, I will read it.
max052
believable - maybe not - but damn good story. hope there is more following
I thought it was a pretty good start to a series.
I hope you keep it up. It is excellent that this is your first erotic story. You have talent.
I liked it
There are many possibilities for the story. Looking forward to reading where this goes. Remember... opinions are like assholes, everyone has one.
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