Daddy's Candy

Hot - Awesome!

My favorite already.

Not there yet

Need more build up to thier relationship, it's just so abrupt. The sex is hot though.

Not bad

but too quick, needed more background (like where's mom?)
Good for a quick jerk-off story

Where's the rest?

For the rest if the story?

I agree with the other comments, the story could benefit from more characterization about their relationship. Whys the daughter so ready to assume her daddy's wants her? Where's Mom, and danger she'll pop in the door and catch them? added suspense & tension if so. What comes next?

weak

nothing imaginative or fresh
no real plot, about as flat line as one can get

Nice One

You made me hard thinking about that tight slutty daughter getting what she needed. GREAT STORY!

Loved it!

Just what I needed to get off. Thank you xx

I love when my daddy tie's me up a does me to no end

Good

Want my dad to put his cock in me like that