5 stars easily!
This story is one of--perhaps THE hottest--mt her son tale in here. Remarkable.
Some slight grammatical errors in tense, but overall forgivable due to the storyline. Thank you and keep this one going!
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Anonymous10/05/15
Fucking fantastic
You know it's a great one when you can cum without even one stroke off your cock through the entire read..
by
Anonymous10/05/15
A great story
Thank you for such a great mother son tale. This Lucky son has achieved what many horny young men only dream about. Mothers soft body is now his playground, she dresses in sexy lingerie for him and slips from her marital bed at night to quell this lust between her legs with her young stud. As for the son mummy's pussy his his stiff as a board most of time and with her spreading her thighs and allowing him to grunt his seed into her womb why would he move out. Dad will soon come to the conclusion that he is a cuckold when after several months of handjobs and oral sex his wife turns up pregnant. I hope you continue this illicit tale and dad can watch from the doorway jerking himself off as his son bends his pregnant mother over doggystyle and hammers her pussy over and over again.
Nice one, Centrum1000. Just the right length and pace; and well written. Good to see fine grammar and story construction. The only negative (if I may be so bold) is the oft-used statement that the son's cock is always bigger than his father's. Sigh.
Keep up the good work.
This story could use a sequel. It has everything a good story series needs. The conflict is multi leveled. You have her as a mother and her as Vicky the stripper, where anyone of the frat brothers could come over to thank the parents and find out Vicky fucked her son. And you have the cuckholding of Mark by Vicky and their son. Then last you have the affair between mom and son, and how much a mother or son will want for the son to have grand kids eventually and how a mother should not produce her own grand children. If you decide to write a sequel and turn this into a series, I look forward to your next effort.
This was a great read. I love this. I really feel that this could use a sequel , or two or three or more. It leaves the reader hungry for more. Thanks a lot for posting this story. Wonderful ;)
I am wondering whether the frat brothers will get to enjoy Vicky too. It would be wonderful for her to visit John on campus. Maybe she could get a chic young haircut and probably a tattoo to mark her new found sexuality.
The father loved the smell and last of his sons cum. Seriously? I realize that this is fiction, but that business is simply implausible. BTW, I have you on my favorite authors list. I only hope you get back to doing better.
chapter was really hot but went down hill from there with the father eating the son's cum, a man knows the smell of pussy juice and cum he couldn't be that stupid.
Three stars, I jus couldn't give it more.
Mark is an Idiot not knowing after twenty years what his wife pussy tasted like...He deserves to eat his son's cum....Do not stop write a few more chapters before the Frat Brothers have her......
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Anonymous10/06/15
Moms lover?
I love mom stories like this ,it reminds me of my own with my mother.We first had intercourse on or near Halloween. She continued to have the occasional romp with my dad. but I was her lifetime lover.We commited incest if that's the right word every time our eyes met.
So the writer is sick and demented. What about you? You came into this section, read the story--what does that make you? I mean besides a hypocrite. I'm thinking...douche bag.
I enjoyed the story, but had to let my imagination break free of the obvious problems. I was really curious, though, when she put on a bathroom! How does one do that? It was still a very hot story, even though most was extremely implausible.
I figured John would stay home and not live in the frat house so he could be with his mother more. l but the idea of her being with him on campus as his girlfriend who was a sister was even more erotic. 5 *'s
I love how you come up with all these creative situations where family members end up fucking the shit out of each other despite their best intentions.
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Anonymous10/07/15
A very well written and clever story ...... exploring their mutual attraction and lush for each other is so HOT and arousing !! Please write more, as John and his Mom develop their expanding sexual relationship. Its obvious his Mom like his bigger cock and will continue to use it for her sexual play ........ Thanks !!
Very well done and the build up was great and the flow really hot. Although, you should have written into the story where the salesgirl actually seduced Vicky since she was ripe for the seduction. Also, could develop this story further by having Vicky actually start dating her son and maybe getting to know the salesgirl better.
i loved your story, it reminds me of some of the parties my son and his friends have had in our basement den :) i especially love that moment, the very moment the power transfers, and it only happens once, when the mother realizes she has gone from being the authority figure to her son to his sexual plaything..
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Anonymous10/11/15
so the father loves the smell and taste of his son's fluids...
great story...really. out of the 10 i have read from you this one is actually entertaining and not mean-spirited towards women. but still one great story does not make up for the fact that i waste part of my life reading 9 of your crappy stories....but this is a great start. :)
I don't know why I missed rating this on the first two readings, but this is the third and it's time to correct the oversight. I gave it a 5* because of how you handled the basement scene without turning it into a debacle, and how you are portraying Vickie's thoughts.
Obviously she hasn't thought of all of the ramifications of their relationship, nor has she considered dear Mark and his possible reactions. Does she still love him and this is just a passing lust? Or will she throw everything away to be with John? Juggling those will be interesting to write, I'm sure. I know that sneaking around will almost inevitably blow up in everyone's faces.
Another thread you could tie in would be the shop girl because Vickie is going to need a lot of lingerie and you left a lovely, lively loose end to be followed up on.
The frat:
Will the members accept that Vickie is John's, or will they assume she's fair game because of how they met her. I don't know frat culture, but won't John need to reside in the frathouse? (That'll lead to some real French Farce scenes.)
Keep up the great work. We're all (except FreakonaLeash73) eagerly looking forward to a continuation of the drama. And, for the record, your sex scenes are realistic and believable. Thanks for keeping it clean and in the family.
by
Anonymous10/23/15
Ha!
Delta Tau Delta. Typical.
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Anonymous10/26/15
Mark likes to share.
He had to know the smell of a "Just Fucked Pussy." I think it turned him on knowing John had just fucked his mom. Mark probably fucked his mom too. Vicky only knows that two cocks are always better than one!
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Anonymous11/02/15
great story
Waiting for the next part of tge story.
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Anonymous11/02/15
Not good
Great idea, but the writer simply couldn't deliver the goods. I realize this is a fantasy, but its a huge stretch for the dad to not smell another mans cum on his wife and to not taste it when he is eating her.
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Anonymous11/14/15
Gotta disagree with the last comment.
Maybe it's lack of experience, but I am not at all certain I can identify the smell of a woman who was just fucked or the taste of another man's cum. I am certain that unless I suspected that my wife was being unfaithful, I would attribute an unusual taste or smell to something innocent, such as my wife had changed her diet or that time of the month was on its way.
I enjoyed the story. The author did an excellent job of making the implausible, a hot mom with no pre-existing incestuous urge, into her son's lover seem plausible. I would have preferred more detailed sex scenes, but that may just be me. Good job.
I would love to see this writer take a shot at another chapter of Making Teacher Mine.
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Anonymous11/28/15
Nicely believable.
This was a well crafted story. A real builder in terms of sexual content and desire as well as being descriptively written.
A REASONABLE EFFORT BUT, SADLY IN NEED OF A SKILLED EDITOR!!!!
parents' (parents' s)
Delta Tau's (Taus)
loop-hole (loophole)
short-list (short list)
tip-toed (tiptoed)
you're french maid (your)
Vicky the Stripper (stripper)
aureole (areola)
down stroke (downstroke)
green-light (green light)
Slowly their mutual orgasms subside (subsided)
in to (into)
has he brought (as)
bee-line (beeline)
put on a bathroom (bathrobe)
She needed a minute to regroup (HOW DOES A SINGLE INDIVIDUAL REGROUP???)
apparently some people cant read somethings and enjoy the content and have to point out errors. Either they do not have a life or enjoy trying to belittle others. They don't even have the balls to use their own user name and sign in as anonymous. Get a life and if you cant say something nice don't say it at all. Great story, love the content and keep writing. enjoyed the twists and thanks for a great read.....
Not normally my type of story, but this was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous04/29/16
Great Read !!!!
What a fun, provocative and well created Mother and Son love/lust story. you did a fantastic job of narrating a sexy and adventurous narrative of one of the best and most arousing fuck adventures I have read in a long time.
by
Anonymous05/12/16
great story! please write a part two!
wow great story! I would love to see a part two to this story. very erotic and well written. I would pay money just for you to write a part two. i hope you read this comment and write a part two! keep up the good work! :)
English
Best
Best fucking mom of all time
Fantastic!!!
5 stars easily!
This story is one of--perhaps THE hottest--mt her son tale in here. Remarkable.
Some slight grammatical errors in tense, but overall forgivable due to the storyline. Thank you and keep this one going!
Fucking fantastic
You know it's a great one when you can cum without even one stroke off your cock through the entire read..
A great story
Thank you for such a great mother son tale. This Lucky son has achieved what many horny young men only dream about. Mothers soft body is now his playground, she dresses in sexy lingerie for him and slips from her marital bed at night to quell this lust between her legs with her young stud. As for the son mummy's pussy his his stiff as a board most of time and with her spreading her thighs and allowing him to grunt his seed into her womb why would he move out. Dad will soon come to the conclusion that he is a cuckold when after several months of handjobs and oral sex his wife turns up pregnant. I hope you continue this illicit tale and dad can watch from the doorway jerking himself off as his son bends his pregnant mother over doggystyle and hammers her pussy over and over again.
One of the best
Nice one, Centrum1000. Just the right length and pace; and well written. Good to see fine grammar and story construction. The only negative (if I may be so bold) is the oft-used statement that the son's cock is always bigger than his father's. Sigh.
Keep up the good work.
Good dirty fun
Straightforward wank tale. Nicely done. 5 stars.
More
This story could use a sequel. It has everything a good story series needs. The conflict is multi leveled. You have her as a mother and her as Vicky the stripper, where anyone of the frat brothers could come over to thank the parents and find out Vicky fucked her son. And you have the cuckholding of Mark by Vicky and their son. Then last you have the affair between mom and son, and how much a mother or son will want for the son to have grand kids eventually and how a mother should not produce her own grand children. If you decide to write a sequel and turn this into a series, I look forward to your next effort.
That was awesome!
Fucking awesome! *****
Brilliant work.
This was a great read. I love this. I really feel that this could use a sequel , or two or three or more. It leaves the reader hungry for more. Thanks a lot for posting this story. Wonderful ;)
I am wondering whether the frat brothers will get to enjoy Vicky too. It would be wonderful for her to visit John on campus. Maybe she could get a chic young haircut and probably a tattoo to mark her new found sexuality.
the only thing missing was the frat party gangbang while the dad is passed out drunk and the mom turns into the house whore.
Put on a bathroom???
"She changed into her new outfit and then put on a bathroom before nervously going down to her son's room" Stuff like this ruined it for me.
I prefer love stories
but this was a fun variation
I was enjoying this story until...
The father loved the smell and last of his sons cum. Seriously? I realize that this is fiction, but that business is simply implausible. BTW, I have you on my favorite authors list. I only hope you get back to doing better.
The first
chapter was really hot but went down hill from there with the father eating the son's cum, a man knows the smell of pussy juice and cum he couldn't be that stupid.
Three stars, I jus couldn't give it more.
what a slut!
and I love her for it!
great story. well written. flowed beautifully.
love the unknowing cuckholding
keep writing
Forced I think not.
Great story.
I think forced is a tad too much. Maybe slightly coerced.
Would have been hard to resist.
4 or 5 more chapters
Mark is an Idiot not knowing after twenty years what his wife pussy tasted like...He deserves to eat his son's cum....Do not stop write a few more chapters before the Frat Brothers have her......
Moms lover?
I love mom stories like this ,it reminds me of my own with my mother.We first had intercourse on or near Halloween. She continued to have the occasional romp with my dad. but I was her lifetime lover.We commited incest if that's the right word every time our eyes met.
Kind of stupid but erotic
It would be kind of stupid for the husband not to know the smell of cum on his wife's neck.
Re: Anonymous comment "So you think..."
So the writer is sick and demented. What about you? You came into this section, read the story--what does that make you? I mean besides a hypocrite. I'm thinking...douche bag.
Hot!
I enjoyed the story, but had to let my imagination break free of the obvious problems. I was really curious, though, when she put on a bathroom! How does one do that? It was still a very hot story, even though most was extremely implausible.
Hot!!!
I figured John would stay home and not live in the frat house so he could be with his mother more. l but the idea of her being with him on campus as his girlfriend who was a sister was even more erotic. 5 *'s
It sucked!
No fucking dialogue. Where is the character interaction? Your a horrible writer. Narrating 99% of the story .....is not a story.
Loved it!
I love how you come up with all these creative situations where family members end up fucking the shit out of each other despite their best intentions.
A very well written and clever story ...... exploring their mutual attraction and lush for each other is so HOT and arousing !! Please write more, as John and his Mom develop their expanding sexual relationship. Its obvious his Mom like his bigger cock and will continue to use it for her sexual play ........ Thanks !!
hot
I can't wait to read more of this story.
5 stars
wonderful. thanks for sharing.
Best mother/son
story I've read in along time! thank you!
Loved this Story
Very well done and the build up was great and the flow really hot. Although, you should have written into the story where the salesgirl actually seduced Vicky since she was ripe for the seduction. Also, could develop this story further by having Vicky actually start dating her son and maybe getting to know the salesgirl better.
Many options, keep writing.
Erotic!
i loved your story, it reminds me of some of the parties my son and his friends have had in our basement den :) i especially love that moment, the very moment the power transfers, and it only happens once, when the mother realizes she has gone from being the authority figure to her son to his sexual plaything..
so the father loves the smell and taste of his son's fluids...
great story...really. out of the 10 i have read from you this one is actually entertaining and not mean-spirited towards women. but still one great story does not make up for the fact that i waste part of my life reading 9 of your crappy stories....but this is a great start. :)
Fantastic
Top story loved her husband being a cuck and eating creampie but for everybodys sakelets have more chapters.
Excellent!
Thank You!
Best in a long time
Thanks that was great That bit more than just another mom does son, loved the idea of the father being an unwitting cuck.
Excellent
Best have read in a long time - believeable exclamation of how mom got into this situation and excellent descriptions
excellent
An excellent read,
I hope there are more chapters soon, this story has much more to give,
Does the Father already know what is happening, did he hear them fucking?
Does the Mother persuade the Father to rent their son a flat off campus, a flat that becomes their secret love nest?
Did the Son get in to the Frat House?
Oversight
I don't know why I missed rating this on the first two readings, but this is the third and it's time to correct the oversight. I gave it a 5* because of how you handled the basement scene without turning it into a debacle, and how you are portraying Vickie's thoughts.
Obviously she hasn't thought of all of the ramifications of their relationship, nor has she considered dear Mark and his possible reactions. Does she still love him and this is just a passing lust? Or will she throw everything away to be with John? Juggling those will be interesting to write, I'm sure. I know that sneaking around will almost inevitably blow up in everyone's faces.
Another thread you could tie in would be the shop girl because Vickie is going to need a lot of lingerie and you left a lovely, lively loose end to be followed up on.
The frat:
Will the members accept that Vickie is John's, or will they assume she's fair game because of how they met her. I don't know frat culture, but won't John need to reside in the frathouse? (That'll lead to some real French Farce scenes.)
Keep up the great work. We're all (except FreakonaLeash73) eagerly looking forward to a continuation of the drama. And, for the record, your sex scenes are realistic and believable. Thanks for keeping it clean and in the family.
Ha!
Delta Tau Delta. Typical.
Mark likes to share.
He had to know the smell of a "Just Fucked Pussy." I think it turned him on knowing John had just fucked his mom. Mark probably fucked his mom too. Vicky only knows that two cocks are always better than one!
great story
Waiting for the next part of tge story.
Not good
Great idea, but the writer simply couldn't deliver the goods. I realize this is a fantasy, but its a huge stretch for the dad to not smell another mans cum on his wife and to not taste it when he is eating her.
Gotta disagree with the last comment.
Maybe it's lack of experience, but I am not at all certain I can identify the smell of a woman who was just fucked or the taste of another man's cum. I am certain that unless I suspected that my wife was being unfaithful, I would attribute an unusual taste or smell to something innocent, such as my wife had changed her diet or that time of the month was on its way.
I enjoyed the story. The author did an excellent job of making the implausible, a hot mom with no pre-existing incestuous urge, into her son's lover seem plausible. I would have preferred more detailed sex scenes, but that may just be me. Good job.
I would love to see this writer take a shot at another chapter of Making Teacher Mine.
Nicely believable.
This was a well crafted story. A real builder in terms of sexual content and desire as well as being descriptively written.
Fantastic
Absolute joy to read, well written & thought off.
A REASONABLE EFFORT BUT, SADLY IN NEED OF A SKILLED EDITOR!!!!
parents' (parents' s)
Delta Tau's (Taus)
loop-hole (loophole)
short-list (short list)
tip-toed (tiptoed)
you're french maid (your)
Vicky the Stripper (stripper)
aureole (areola)
down stroke (downstroke)
green-light (green light)
Slowly their mutual orgasms subside (subsided)
in to (into)
has he brought (as)
bee-line (beeline)
put on a bathroom (bathrobe)
She needed a minute to regroup (HOW DOES A SINGLE INDIVIDUAL REGROUP???)
man o man
apparently some people cant read somethings and enjoy the content and have to point out errors. Either they do not have a life or enjoy trying to belittle others. They don't even have the balls to use their own user name and sign in as anonymous. Get a life and if you cant say something nice don't say it at all. Great story, love the content and keep writing. enjoyed the twists and thanks for a great read.....
Amazing
Not normally my type of story, but this was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great Read !!!!
What a fun, provocative and well created Mother and Son love/lust story. you did a fantastic job of narrating a sexy and adventurous narrative of one of the best and most arousing fuck adventures I have read in a long time.
great story! please write a part two!
wow great story! I would love to see a part two to this story. very erotic and well written. I would pay money just for you to write a part two. i hope you read this comment and write a part two! keep up the good work! :)
Holy Shit
now that is a very hot an wild story, loved it, but it needs a 2nd chapter please. Rated 5 Stars
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